All Comments on 'My Perfect Woman Pt. 01'

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Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel89about 2 months ago

15 years and Vanessa hasn't ever improved...

Her protagonist is always the exact same girl, just with a different name.

Her fetishistic obsession with tiny tits and protagonists who get mistaken for children just gets kinda weird as culture changes over the course of a decade and a half...

And her having gotten the term "The Chinese Virus" for COVID-19 from Donald Trump in a suspiciously deleted story is a huge red flag to me as an Asian-American.

FcksocietyFcksocietyabout 2 months ago

Ignore the comment above, this Cyberweasel89 mixing Race and Politics into a fantasy story.

Claiming offense in a sex story is new levels of stupidity.

Talking about actual criticism, this story moves too quick and switches unnecessarily from narration from the guys pov and the girls description of what happened making it distracting and difficult to keep up.

Please add more details to the story and events.

Can't wait for Part 2 though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Some guys like women with no breast tissue.

There is no requirement for honesty in name or gender declaration by an author.

Most author's write about what turns them on, and for many they just bang out the same story over and over again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I see Cyberweasel89 is still spewing her TDS spawned hate at vanessa. Spamming posts now reported

Campus77Campus77about 2 months ago

If this is an example of Vanessa's work, I will have to follow and read more stories. These two remind me of my wife and I when we were younger. She was almost as exhibitionistic as Harper. This brought back some good memories. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

At home or in public my wife wears only high heels absolutely Buck fucking naked and I love it whenever she works up a stranger and impales her big cunt on any cock available. She answers our door everyday naked except for her high heels. Pizza delivery or Chinese food deliveries are fucking amazing when they see her bare 38D tits and are cunt !

Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel89about 1 month ago

@Fcksociety

Weird that you insist that Vanessa not improving in 15 years and her protagonists all being the same flat-chested girl is somehow "race" and "politics." Like, that's so incoherent...

@Anonymous

Ah, the Trump white knighter is still too cowardly to sign in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

It's your pulling politics into it and making the exact same post in every story Vanessa posts that gives away your political hatred. "not improving:" and "same protagonists clearly isn't the motivation for your spamming it all about the orange man with you, he's living rent free in your head. And, BTW, posting anonymously is no more or less cowardly than posting under a pseudonym. In any case I'd rather be a thought a coward by the deranged like you than be someone so deranged by hatred of a politician that I'd go around stalking an author on an erotic fiction site because she dared use a phrase that the politician also used.

FcksocietyFcksociety29 days ago

@cyberweasel This isn't reddit to spew your politics. This is a fantasy website. Stop being so insecure over your issues. Don't project it on everyone.

Wtf does Trump have to do with a sex story? What is it about flat tits that gets you so twisted?

There are thousands of authors everywhere else. Go read Communist Manifesto if you want to. Vanessa has thrived for 15 years and continues to do so. Stop hating. And move on.

This isn't an echo chamber for your politics and race baiting.

Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel899 days ago

@Fcksociety

Strange... you claim that Vanessa forcing politics into her stories is okay, but readers commenting on her doing so is wrong? It seems your issue isn't "politics." It seems you issue is actually people who are critical of a New York con man.

Trump has to do with a sex story because in a suspiciously deleted story, Vanessa referred to COVID-19 as "The Chinese Virus." It is a term that Trump coined which directly increased violence against Asian-Americans within the country. I was even knocked out of my wheelchair by who Trump Supporters who assumed I was Chinese (I'm actually Korean-American) and I still have a scar on my forehead for it. Again, it's VERY strange that you insist Vanessa is allowed to push politics into her stories, but her readers aren't allowed to comment on it.

Every single one of her characters is the same but with a different name. I'm not sure why you jump to defend flat tits and call it "getting twisted" but it's starting to read like "white knight" behavior.

I'm not sure what the "Communist Manifesto" has to do with anything. Especially when you have a raging hatred of anyone mentioning politics in comment sections, yet... you're being extremely political right now.

Race baiting, echo chamber for politics, and "hating?" Hmmm, I'm starting to see what your issue is with "politics." You know that white knighting a New York con man won't do anything but prove you were gullible enough to buy snake oil, yes?

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