All Comments on 'My Pink Plaid Shirt Ch. 02: Saturday'
by SaphirBlack
- 15 Comments
Lcnmdover 8 years agoThank you for following up with more of this story, love it!
I hope chapter three is in the works :)
L
Anonymousover 8 years agoI don't know where this is heading but i can't wait for the next chapter. It's so good, so sexy and so erotic.
Heisenhugover 8 years agoRescuing the Princess or paving the road to hell with good intentions? Hope we find out eventually :p
No_one_knows_meover 8 years agoI was hoping for a second (and more!) part to this story and you delivered! Very well.
Erotic... Hot... Sensual... Cute... Funny!! You're one talented writer!!
Can't wait for the next chapter! ;) xx
Maonaighover 8 years agoIs Sam sincere? Is sweet little Jen being taken for a fool? Is it going to be long before the next part? Because. SaphirBlack, you've got me---and I suspect a lot others---hooked. Intriguing second part, very well done!
Anonymousover 8 years agoI was in serious anticipation of part two, and now I'm mad that I can't immediately read part three. This story is outstanding!
linda1234over 8 years agoThis is one of the very best stories I've ever read. Eroticism, emotion, suspense, great characters - I love ever bit of it. You're an incredible writer. Please keep writing!
Linda
Anonymousover 8 years agoGreat story Saphir. I've been checking every week since you posted the story for the 3rd installment coz I can't wait to read how things will end up for the two best friends. Please don't make us wait for long. This is such a great story and you're such a talented writer.
Anonymousover 8 years agoWow, Jen's in a tough spot. If she impresses Sam, Sam might be convinced to make a go of it with her fiance. Ooops. And if Jen doesn't impress Sam, then Jen will feel just as bad. Look forward to Part 3.
kedvesalmost 8 years agoplease dont leave us hanging ... you draw us in and then leave us hanging
dont be one of those writers who dont care about their readers...
im looking for ward to a conclusion :) hopefully a happy one for Jen :)
used2bjustjabout 2 years agoI'm sorry this author seems to have stopped writing here on Lit. This is a really good story that could do with another chapter or two.
5/5
J
