All Comments on 'My Pink Plaid Shirt'

Uh, how about more, then you could write more, and perhaps afterwards, a little more. I would love to hear about their series of misadventures. Hope to see you on here again soon.

I wonder whether she can convince Samantha to marry her instead?

...you need to write about the weekend and these 'misadventures'.

I'm going to need a part 2 please. This was.... Yea. I had to read this again to make sure I read it right. Wow!!! This is a start to a really great series

Such a great story!

Thank you!

L

Soooo hot :o

Yes, please, sequel!

Did not see that coming.... Incredible writing!! Please write more... Please! Pretty please!! :)

I saw it coming a mile away but still that was freaking hot. You left just enough hints for the reader to catch on while leaving the main character completely oblivious. And actually, while I did suspect, it was only confirmed when she refused to show her face while they were doing the do. I can only hope there's a part 2 coming but either way....

this definitely needs a second chapter!

Ok, you got me! Heather dry humped Jen and the dance floor but Sam mysteriously sexed her in the bed...umm, My Pink Plaid Shirt 2, please

The twist was obvious from the moment Jenny's bed was invaded. But... that in no way spoiled the story which was very well written. I really enjoyed your opening paragraph with poor little nerdish Jenny listing her shortcomings. Although only a fictional character, my heart bled for the poor wee lass. All in all, Jenny is a loveable creation and I think perhaps she could provide you with a series (and not necessarily with Samantha in).

My sole criticism is that some of your paragraphs could do with breaking down a little. Long paragraphs are fine in print but not easy reading on a computer screen. (Oh, and it's 'champagne', not 'champaign'.)

Very good start and so much more to enjoy by both .

Dearest Jen.

I would suggest you think outside the box to find a lover. We arn't any easier to fit than the wrong woman. Sorry we made such a poor showing at the club.

Good hunting in your future you can't stay with Sammantha for much longer.