All Comments on 'My Playmate Ch. 04'

This has to be the best story (all parts) that I have ever read on this website. Fucking awesome.

It made me horny, but also sometimes made me laugh and sometimes shed tears.

Thank you so very much.

Thank you. Best story I've read.

This was a great story. It was hot with great characters. I hope to see a sequel with the same characters!

another amazing story, the foreshadowing was really dramatic. interesting ending. cant wait for ur next story!

I LOVE this story! Keep it going! Lots of directions you could take. Great character development and well written. I'll read all your stuff now.

I loved these stories. Usually this site is for the straight sex, but you get involved in these stories, you want to hate some characters, and then you want to love others, all at the sametime. I just wish my college experience was similiar to this, maybe not the heartbreak, but everything else.

Again, wonderful fabolous story, cant wait to read the rest of your submissions.

I couldn't resist reading the entire series straight through. Terrific characters and storyline. The sex was fantastic but the story was much more than just the sex. I really hope to see the series continue. Great job!

This was one of the best stories I've read on this site! Once I started, I couldn't stop -- stayed up almost all night to read the sweet finish to this love story, and that's what it is. To see 2 young people in college explore their sexuality, relationships in a way that there was no apparent struggles between them, to see them separate and go in different life directions and then to see them reunited years later was just a great story to read. The erotic part of the story was so well done and hot, but this story is about love found, love lost and then regained. Thanks for sharing.

All of your stories have been excellent. Intelligent, intense, beleivable and cohesive. Please continue with your great writing.

I ended up reading the story straight through, which wasn't my plan at all. Great characterisation and could at least as easily have been filed under romance. I will read more of your work. Kudos and thank you!

This wasn't quite as good or as well written as most of the wonderful stories you write. It would have been nice to see see more communication between couples at least. And a couple days following him and his love now they are reunited in california would be a great way 2 wrap it up. Thanks still glad I read it always eager 4 more.

really liked this series.

a continuation would be awesome

Just damn excellent! I finished in Chap. 3 but read the whole story because the characters were engaging, the storytelling was excellent, the emotions portrayed were most human, just all in all, a damn fine story!

Good job, man!

I was hoping he'd come to his senses and realized that Anna loved him more than Courtney loved him. This is someone who gave herself completely to him. She changed for him. Courtney, well, she never really fought for him. She dumped him like a sac of potato and then took him back like nothing had ever happened. Perhaps I'm a sucker for romance and loyalty, but I would have stayed with Anna (ie. not fuck with Christine, Hailey, Courtney etc).

Anyway, that's just my 2cents. Thanks for another great story. Please, keep on writing.

I can only echo what has already been said. Great story line and character development. I do kind of wish he had ended up with Anna, but you really do always remember your first love even if you never have a chance to be with her again.

it's when at the end, you wish that it wasn't the end of the story, that somehow this means it was a great book.

And then I blinked, as I started reading your little story. And then I blinked and I was half way through reading your little story. And then I blinked and I was through reading your little story. THANK GAWD! Your little story sucked in sooooo many ways.

Please don’t listen to people and their distasteful comments. They are the ones who are mean and suck . This was a very enjoyable story about the real lives of young people and told in a mature manner.

A heartbreaking ending

Wish they stayed a threesome

Ughhh! Painful! It desperately needs a chapter 5, where he connects back with Courtney.