All Comments on 'My Private Swimming Hole Ch. 01'

by ManosHands

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story!

Your words provided the situation - my imagination provided the 'visuals' of the two women and the guy! And, just so you'll know, the girls had nice tan lines!

fewellafewellaover 5 years ago
Great introduction

Can't wait to read part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great!

It is a hot, arousing and exciting story. It is pure fun to read! I like cfnm situations but it is really arousing to be photographed by a woman. I am looking forward to read chapter 2!!!!!!!!

ErosfanErosfanover 5 years ago
Great story!

This is a light, fun story and is totally believable.

I can't wait to hear about "tomorrow".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Triple skinny dipping

Great story! No sex, but immensely entertaining nonetheless! Felt like I was at the lake with them, not just reading about it. If there are future chapters, maybe a bit of groping and kissing could happen. Really enjoyed it.

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I figure that it's about time that I update this 'profile', so here goes: I guess that I am no longer a novice writer. As of this update, I have 28 stories submitted, with quite a few in various stages of development. There are two sets of stories that use re-occurring chara...

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