All Comments on 'My Ranger'

This was truly one of the hottest buildups to an incredible sex scene that I've read on this site. Beautifully written, just the perfect tempo in the story - from beginning to end. I hope there's more to this 10-day excursion!

I rated your story a 5.

It's a really good effort. Your story has excellent character development and well written, hot sex.

My constructive criticism, however, is that your story needs just a little bit more editing. There are a number of minor errors that could be found and corrected, with another read through, or two.

I really want to know what happens to them the rest of the time their in the woods.