All Comments on 'My Roommate Ch. 02'

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pip46 over 5 years ago

Great story

This story has definitely taken a turn for the better, I do hope there will be many more parts to come

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Story worth a Five Rating

Add more chapters as this story deserve many more chapters. Love that Lucy finds herself finally and gives herself to Ebony.

More chapters are needed to finish this story.

Anonymousover 2 years ago

I agree with your other readers that this story has legs, is very hot, therefore, more chapters should be added to describe, in detail, how Lucy begins to slip into the complete roll of Ebony's slave bitch. Also, you could add how Ebony begins to truly desire Lucy and her skinny body which sounds fabulous. More please.

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