by Bazzza
As good as your best! Wonderfully presented story that will bring back tender memories for all its readers.
My first time was memorable. The new feelings, exploration, and exhilaration of the act were very ably, but tenderly described. This is one of your best stories. Keep up the good work.
That was a great story that you wrote about Steve and Jen. I love how they got together finally in her bedroom after her parents had left with her brother for the weekend to the tennis tournament. It would be nice to write another chapter about them.
Well done. A simple yet sexy, straightforward story of young lovers. Rare to get a good female perspective story from a male writer. Usually when guys write these the woman are outrageous sluts lol. Nice work