by JukeboxEMCSA
A character that finally accepts responsibility for their actions. Well done.
I really enjoyed how the story was going and really liked the different twist, but just when it was really getting good you skipped to the end. I wish you would have given us more of Devon being broken.
Such a simple, glorious tale. I've read it before, and likely will again.
There are so many stories buried in the background of the final scene. What a library of other tales and side-quests. And what will happen after the final restoration? Mmmm. Such a smorgasbord of stories.
Thanks.