All Comments on 'My Sister Eva Continues It All'

awesome write my friend.. Amazing. Too good :)

you write a novel.

both stories were the best ive ever read great job!!

Great as usual. 5*

I liked it, though I think the second part could have been broken up into several parts. Although I have to admit I saw the ending (with Dad & Co) coming. ;)

"Oh god, I'm cumming. Oh fuck ... oh god ... oh shit ... oh god it's so good, so good, oh, oh, oh, OH MY GOD!" for 9 fucking pages?

Too bad about mom, maybe she could have them redone by one of them fancy doctors in Europe have a tube transplanted in her. Everything else is transplanted why not. Excellent story bud.

Thank you very much for a very good story. It moved along at a nice pace and kept the interest throughout. I have read quite a few stories over the years and this ranks as one of the best!

I look forward to your next story.

SurFurBob

Thought the ending went a little to fast. You covered one night in about 6 maybe 7 pages and then covered years in half a page. Still a good read . Thanks.

man you sure write a great story! Loved every word, now looking for whats next.

I really like the over the top theme of the story, and the writing style the Dawg has.

I think he is the only one that can pull it off as successfully as he has shown in this fine story.

I'm so glad that some of the girls became pregnant, but sad that his mom couldn't.

Oh well, the story really did draw me in to it, and I still have to think it's more of a novel than just a story.

Thanks D Dawg it's been a pleasure to read your work.

Over the top fantasy is definitely very well represented...more please!

i loved it all

as appallingly bad.

I loved every sec every word and it took four fully charged batteries for my phone but it was worth it

This is my favorite story, i wish you continued it, i jacked off to it and came about 5 to 6 times while reading the 2 stories together

This story was Epic !!!!

This was jyst amazing and im mad theres no more to this storie . And any one who says diffrent is just mad they couldnt think of something this good. Espical if they cant even tell you there names.

Wish I was him...

this was a great story including when he fucks his cousin have u thought about continuing the story line

You are definitely a lord in the realm of Fantasy. With such good stories like this on Literotica I can see why its so famous. So good job Dezurtdawg!!

sex scenes were all pretty darn good, but the dialogues horribly cheesy

this was great i loved the whole story i wish i had a talent like u

I would love to see more chapters

You are a awesome story teller.

Looks like you picked up a troll don't listen to the garbage great story and most of your stories are great at least 95% are awesome or something in that range.

Damn Hottttt!!

i love your story! so fucking awesome. if u got readers saying its crap then they're wrong big time!!!

More please.....

You. Should make a 3 or a 4 or a 5one about what happened to them all after that night I would really appraseate it my family love these story's my parents are divorced so my brother and my sisters are all living to gather when we read the part about the boy vrs 10 girls me and my sisters made a bet and my sister and all my brothers ecspet for me lost I won but my brothers and sisters are always treating me badly and when I won the bet I was happy but they always try to kill me when something happens that they don't want to happen or for their not to be another one of these about what happens to dale and all the girls that are staying with dale and the children what happened to them and is dale going out with all those girls but Jessica and robin and what will dales life be like now with him being the only man in a house full of horny women who want dale really badly and his family please I'm begging you please make another one of these story's before I become rode kill I can keep avoiding my brothers and sisters forever oh no they are trying to tackle me and I have 3 older brothers and me plus 11sisters who are hornney and I'm like dale my sister are all coming after me but with their friends that are girls now make me have to last a long time with a lot of sexy hot and sex crazy girls and my sister and they are only interested in me and I'm only 22 and my brothers are 32,28, and 29 and my sisters friends are older than me and their are on days that my sisters are doing gmynasics or (cheerleading practice) not really but trying to subduce me for over 4 years and I beg my brothers to help since they play football and baseball and soccer and they attract lots of girls that once my brothers get home and they see me the girls always pretend to be watching my brother practece but are only interested in me working out on my back Pattieo or when I am swimming and when I'm just relaxing out side and when my brothers notice they go up to me and use me as a football tackle dummy when they tie me up and give me a minute to get as far away as possible and I am never left alone I am some time saved by my sisters and their friends only for them to try to have sex with me but I was able to hypnotize this one girl not my sisters but the girl I am talking about almost alway gets me out from my brothers and sisters her name is amber and her parents hate me and most days I just stay as far away from home as I can and I hide in my little jungle hunt only big to hold just me and I can't survive if you make more of these story's for after this one or my sibling will kill me please make a new one that's stating what's happening after his cousin moves in with him along with most of the girls that were with him tell a story of what's happening now I have less then a year left please write a story that is the story after this one what's now happening in dale life after some of the girls had baby's and moved in with dale agin please hurry

I liked the story Alot and another would be excellent and Maybe give an insight as to how the Husbands feel about their Ex-Wives and Daughters being "boned" by the only other Male in the family and what of the other Girls did he keep all 13 or did they Finally move on.

It make us old farts feel really bad about things now as we were never that good and now are not worth shooting. It was good to read.

Continue continue continue. Great story.

waste of time

MAKE MORE MAN.

GET WRITEN YOU LAZT BUM!!!!!!!!

Don't end it there. We need more of this great tale

All I can say is I wish there really was a guy like this. And I wish I had known him. I can relate to both Jane and Sue. Most of the men I ever had sex with told me women don't climax and the other half sort of insinuated I was frigid. Men make women frigid by not letting them orgasm or more aptly not knowing what they are doing not caring about anyone but their might dicks.. A big cock is well and good but if he don't know how to use it it don't mean a thing. I know this is fantasy but I hope you will add more to it.

I give it ten out of ten boners me and my hubby loved it.

Please keep it going there are so many places for this to go.

THANKS

Fucking brilliant was hard the whole time many loads lost because of this story hope you continue

What a great fantasy piece. Taken as separate experiences each encounter was believable and well written. As you say as a whole it IS fantasy. LOL! Thankyou.

(Now I have a standard to aspire to I must start writing!)

Oh my god. This was by far the best story I've ever read! I will gladly read this more if you continue it!

This is One of those stories that can get you addicted to incest. And one of the best incest stories I have ever come across. I would love for you to make another sequel but if you don't this is a great way to end the story. You my friend are an artist.

Superman would have been wiped out after a new years party like that!!!!! ROFLMFAO!!!!

Well done sir. Well done indeed!!!! :-D

Oh my fucking GOD that dude is lucky. I wish that I was able to have an orgy with only women to "milk" me dry. I think that this has become my favorite story. Lucky guy got all those ladies pregnant. We don't really see too much stories about women getting prego but I FUCKEN LOVE IT :)

great story

but the end no

no part three that sucks

Great story!!! I would love to read a part 3 though

How will we know if every woman in his entire conclave get pregnant.

He'll his mom is still young! She could very well have her tube untied! Also he loves Amber! Their still needs to be a wedding to top it all off!

I hope to see a part 3!

hope you keep on writing! dear god i hope you keep on with stories like this. you make me cum so much with your stories .ALMOST as good real sex! thank you!!!!

I think this story is perfect as is. It is a little fantastic, but hey, its your fantasy. I think, also, that a ch addition would degrade the integrity of the story. Already characters outside the original five are introduced, but so far the story has held together. More parts would involve more outsiders and might cheapen the tale. I'm usually an 'always more!'guy when I find a good story, but somewhere even a good one has to end. This has been a good one.

people are jealous and it show

Really it was a ridiculous story, however I loved every minute of it.

he may be good but I don't think a bottle of Viagra could help him thru that party. good story I gave it 5 stars

DAMN HE MUST BE SUPER HUMAN GOOD STORY HARD TO BELIEVE BUT GOOD READ.

DO YOU HAVE A SEQUEL AND HOW MANY CHILDREN DID HE HAVE ?? DID THEY ALL LIVE TOGETHER OR WHAT??

RON TEXAS

Wow, what a story, you really know how to build up the tension and then make it last. Just wonderful. Adding in another 3 girls and a mother, plus Sue and the pizzas was a good twist.

Maybe you could consider another chapter of him having the entire cheerleader squad in one day, like on Thanksgiving? Similar to how Debbie did Dallas all those years ago? Just a thought!

But even if there no sequel, this was one hell of a 9 pages, you even surpassed the first chapter of Dale, Evie and Amber - no mean feat in itself

So, thanks again, that was awesome! Just a shame I can only award it 5 stars !

It wasn't until after I'd posted my previous comment, that I realised this story was 3 years old. Anyhow, if you should read this, I've had another thought on a third episode, if you should want to write one?

How about you marry off Dale to Amber, have Evie as Maid of Honour and every cheerleader as the bridesmaids? Then invite all those women, plus their mothers and sisters, etc. who attend the wedding to a massive orgy with Dale? You can keep the male guests busy with free booze , strippers and lap dancers. Tell them the women have found something else to occupy their time.....

You could make the orgy last all night, what night it could be, eh?

I do hope you'll read this and write one more episode? You stories are that good, one more episode with Dale , Evie and Amber, would I'm sure, be welcomed by others as well as me.

So, please - let us have one more chapter !

Dezurtdawg, Please keep up the stories. You write well, the stories are believable, & talent like yours needs lots of exposure (at least to those of us who enjoy this style of writing!).

You continued on with "How Do You Spell Relief?" & while you admitted that your writing style is different from BobbyT's, I think it is close enough that you might also consider finishing a few other stories abandoned & left readers hungering for more.

Did not finish this story as it is waa...aay, waa...aay too lo-ong! (borrowing dezurtdawg's writing style) It was soo...oo repetitive!

I understand that this is totally a fantasy story but it got pretty tiring after awhile. Also, there were a lot of very shallow people there with everybody falling in love after a day or two of non-stop screwing. Btw, did anyone count the number of times good ol' Dale came?

EXACTLY as advertised. Enjoyed this very much for precisely what it was.

I would love to experience this girls

phoenix23ninja@gmail.com

Email me if you want to make this happen

By the way i dont check email that often

I don't know how many times I've read this story but it just keeps getting better with age ! I do wish you would continue it. I know you say this is pure fantasy but even so there has to be some reality to it to he able to make it cum to life like you do. This really should be made into a movie !!

I'm not even going to try to critique it, I just had too much fun reading it!

And as you said at the beginning, the loooonggg drawn out sounds supported the text extremely well.

Unless I've missed something and there's another chapter somewhere, I feel the ending summation was a bit abrupt. That's not a complaint, I just wanted it to keep going. Still do, for that matter.

The gay "Hunting Party" was a delightful touch, and the results even appeared to be just.

Thanks for your excellent writing, and keep up the good work.

My cock is made at me o-o because I could only keep it up to cum three times through this story you're a great writer and u should write more

OMG Great fucking story

Love your work, can't get enough of it

I love how long this was and how in depth. Amazingly well written and made for great reading. I would love to of been the Dale, a harem is every mans dream. thanks for a great finish....

Enjoyed this five star production of incest at its best. Especially enjoyable to have the virgin, Beth, get nailed by the huge cock. The babies added to the story.

Love them all, especely Amber, Evie Mindy and Sue..

While I enjoyed the first story, this one no offense sucked... To explain, I think your writing style and the like are great, I have no issues with your details and such, however where problems arise is this whole chapter of 9 pages was way too drawn out. It was nothing but back to back to back sex, and when you have that much sex scenes in any literotica story you start to get desensitized to it and it loses any meaning whatsoever... If we removed all the sex from this chapter we'd only have a few lines of text, the true irony is your last paragraph or 2, which contained some of the only actual content of the chapter, was also rushed lmao. You can write a sex scene, we get it, but I for one needed more plot and breaks between the sex as it just got stupid after awhile. You would've had a much better story had you paced things out better, shown the story over time as we get to know the harem members more, have them explore new areas (maybe go to a cabin on vacation or the beach etc). Instead you gave us 9 pages where most of it happened in 24 hrs and the ending was so rushed it was atrocious, the only good thing I can say about it is that you at least provided some semblance of an ending where some authors don't but it's so disappointing to see this when you clearly know how to write. What the HELL made you think the readers wanted to read nonstop sex scenes throughout the entire story? How boring and repetitive can you get, really.

I know that's story is only your fantasies, and no man (except Superman, if no kryptonite war near him) can cum this several times with 10 woman's in only one night, but I want to say something:

I want to be Dale!, and make my wife sexually happy for all her life...

5* for you!

I say "(except Superman, if no kryptonite war near him)", when I want to say "(except Superman, if no kryptonite was near him)"

I`m sorry :)

Too long and unrealistic. Two stars.😞😞

Boy what stamina. He had

His dick's too big! Nobody can cum that much! Unfuckingbelivable!

On a serious note, I really liked the story and I think you really have a promising career as a writer.

A bit(or more) long, and completely unrealistic, but still a fun read. Lots of action, for sure, and who wouldn't love to be able to perform that well. If only!

5 Stars, of course.

Keep writing!

RaM

It was nice for a page or 2 but 9 pages of rumping no thanks.

The anon complainers need to get a life. This is a FANTASY work of fiction. I loved it

I loved it and I cannot believe I'm about to say this, the sex was getting ridiculous! I love stories like this and I was amazed I thought it but towards the end of it all I just got sick of the same thing! With each of the girls the sex scenes all just seemed the same. I think I was just getting sick of reading pretty much the same thing over and over... I loved the first one and I love your other stories so idk it may of just been an odd moment.

Too long, too repetitive, too 'amazing sex'.

Sometimes less IS more....

Good story and well written but the sex was the same just with different names and was just too long.

Loved it, better than the first one, would appreciate a bit more character development. Pay no heed to the haters

Fucking brilliant I have read both stories and think you are a fucking genius please make a 3rd but make sure you keep Eva and amber

Wow wow wow wow, what more can we say? Absolutely brilliant, good ending to.

We'll have read some other of your works and found them good, but after this you're going into favorite authors.

Thank you for writing,

Tanhors and family.

That's kinda hypocritical of your mom and aunt about there husband's when the sisters were doing the very same thing. How is that right? All in all good though just that questionable part. Make sure you write about the children from the ones who have not had one yet

No, afraid is the wrong word, terrified is more correct, Your constant inclusion of God, Jesus, and Holy in places that are not only, but totally offensive. You are pitifully to immature face the fact that these words, and what they represent, terrify you. This is more than evident by your use and overuse of them. Such use indicates your attempt to demean, not only the words, but their meaning, those who live by them and the Christian religion itself.

It is also ridiculous to believe that all of these females would use the same terms to indicate they were in the throws of a climax. Since I began reading the stories here, I have been asking women, and a few teenage girls about all of the screaming during their climaxes, only three even admitted to being even a little vocal, yet all acknowledge for the most part, their sexual activity has been above par. They simply felt no need to scream.

dezurtdawg here!

Hi guys n gals, just a quick note to let all of you know a few things.

First of all, I AM NOT DEAD........YET!

Besides my writer's block, my ticker started acting up a few years back and after way too many trips to the doctor they figured it out and prescribed meds to help with it. (My arteries are clean, just a non-correctable low expulsion factor. IF you know what that means you have my sympathy.) So I bounced from good days to bad days and the doctor helped to exacerbate that problem with constant changes to my meds. Shit!

Finally had a pacemaker implanted and, that, along with different meds seems to have stabilized things for me. So I've been slowly working on my long dormant stories. Unfortunately, while all of this went on I have forgotten my password to get onto my author's page to upload new stories that I have ready. Every time I ask for the reset password code it turns out that it won't work and thus far the help people here have been NO HELP!

So anyway, wish me luck at getting that fixed. I will try to add this note to all of my stories, or at least the last part for those that are series. Take care, all of you, and don't forget to vote!

dezurtdawg

Having had a pacemaker installed in the '10's' - getting the meds tuned and body readjusted - you should be up and going - just exercise your mind and body and you will be amazed at what you will be doing!

Just like your stories - keep'em coming and enjoy the crafting of each one. We will be devouring each as they flow from your mind!

Thank you for the update, and being a newby to your stories - am pleased I discovered you when I did!

1st comment I've seen invoking a fear of the flying spaghetti monster, you must have done something right.

Seriously, the story is nucking futs!! The guy coming how many times 2, 3 dozen, but one of the complaints is how they got the men out of the way, really??

The descriptive of all the sex was fun and how the harem grew through the night, finishing with how they tried to finish him off.

Would be fun to see how things go as the 'community' grows. Will the eldest son cut off his dad's dick when he hits 18 and claim all the women for himself?

Glad to see you're getting fixed up, keep fighting the good fight!

Hi dezurtdawg,

Sorry to hear about the health problems, I hope you're recovering well.

I've read this before, but it's well worth a second or third read.

The story line is unreal, 10 women non-stop for over 12 hours, never going soft and never running out of ammo - if only !

Once you're feeling 'up to it' a third installment of this would be very welcome. It's just one hot story, or maybe it's just the way you tell it ?

But whatever it is, it was very entertaining.

Best wishes,

Rapier

Nice twist with the gay father and uncle

You can write unbelievable sex scenes! Dale was a little sappy, but it worked!

I don't know how, but it would be nice to have a sequel to this.

Great story, nice fantasy, from beginning to end.

Seriously, this would make a great adult movie script.

It was a fun read and a sequel would be good.

This is an awesome story. I wish you could add to it.

If I did half of what Dale did, I'd be dead......

I think I'll go have a protein shake....

All I can say is WOW. This was a great story which really deserves a sequel. Gets my 5+ star vote.

great story. wish you would write at least one more chapter

In defense of the indignant wives --

Some have stated that Jessica and Robin were hypocrites, but that's not the case. Rather, they had been increasingly neglected for years until Dale rocked their world. While many women are monogamous, in the upper-tier circles a woman may tolerate an unfaithful husband as long as she's already getting her own satisfaction on the side elsewhere (both cheating) or if he does his best to keep her pipes clean as well as his side-piece(s). Libidos vary, but if your needs aren't getting met, that can lead to a breakup, especially after any children are grown.

So while Jessica and Robin had a growing sex drive, they were getting less sex and what they got was unsatisfactory, while it was obvious the men had been having a grand old time -- without the wives getting their share.

Continuous erections and multiple ejaculations, penetration balls deep in one thrust, anal without lube, and no one grossed out by sucking cock from an ass or sucking semen from the ass -- a lot of fantasy physics here, but all in grand fun, though the latter two personally gross me out a bit. I have no problem with ass play but clean up afterward with plenty of soap and water; it keeps you from smelling funky and is considerate of your partner(s). Done with the soapbox for now.

Would have enjoyed a tad more about the other women and whether any others decided to have Dale's babies, nor did we hear about Dale and Amber tying the knot. Ah, well.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

If only this could happen in reality