All Comments on 'My Sister Made Me Ch. 03'

Thank you for continuing this story.

It’s a fuckfest. Girls just wanna have fun! They just wanna. Girls, they wanna have fun.

The comment is gone now, but I noticed someone complained about the abuse. I too don't care for the abuse of Samantha, but how about we wait until he finishes the story? Would that be ok? I don't think, from his other stories, that MC, nor his characters of Allesandra and Antonia, will let this abuse go unpunished.

On the flip side I love how Alex is becoming a pet slut for Toni. Not that he writes exclusively for me, but this story could be. It hits all my favorite erotica topics. Lesbian, check. Incest, check. Sisters, check. Seduction, check. Domination, check. All the above combined? Damn, it's like you read my mind, MC. Allesandra doing any and every thing Antonia tells her. It could only be better if mom is involved.

The main thing is another MC story though. There are few authors on Lit who can actually tell a story. Mentalcase is one of them. Not a fuck suck wham bam stroke story, but an actual story. You have three running concurrently, MC; with any luck we can get one of those three every month. A solid five stars, and wish the ratings system would change to ten. You would deserve every one of them.

You are an excellent gifted writer and I enjoy and appriciate all of your work. You have a amazing talent and I thank you for sharing it with us. I hope that you will also contniue "Lucky Man" and "Emily Untethered". Best regards for your continued sucess.

I like how Kenny's parents are apparently swingers and getting some yummy Alex. I'm a little torn...I am majorly turned on by Alex and Toni's antics, but I despise them a little too. These gorgeous girls can do and get anything they want. Also, I suspect Pastor Dan is letting others mess around with Sam. Double D's, huh? Must be the same universe as Lucky Man?

Like the tie in to Double D's. Not crazy bout the samantha/preacher...i tend to skim those. but that is just me tho- the Alex/Toni parts are crazy hot. Keep up the great work Mentalcase! Looking forward to the next chapter of Emily too.

I thoroughly enjoy reading your stories they are a great mix of creative story telling, and smut. I enjoy your characters dyfunctions and all. That goes for ALL your stories please keep them cumming.

Holy crap this is a great story! I love Pastor Dan tricking Samantha the most... omg, cannot wait for more! Thank you!

Another good read however i dont like the fact that Alex is becoming so slutty. I prefer what you did in JTSOU where everything was kept within the family. 4 Stars from me this time.

that I never saw these stories before. You are a master! I can't wait to read more

A little more story than just sexy story, but that's nice sometimes and this one is so well developed in plot and characters. I like that Alex is the protective one but Toni is the dominant. Like how her nerd friends are polite, empathic, and appreciative even while being horn-dogs. Wade also has a little extra, unpredictable depth and chivalry for a somewhat jock-type high-school senior... Well done.

Another really good chapter. Fun and exciting read. On to Ch. 4.... binge-reading triggered now.

Oh yes yes , Love Alex and Toni , Wades a lucky boy for sure as twins are the holy grail ❤️

Sam is heading for a surprise I can feel it and her cumming .

Lucky Mr and Mrs Logan .

The nerds , dream come true for nerds 😂

Five stars again from us , just a genuine lovely sexy well written storyline, thankyou .