All Comments on 'My Sister's Helping Hands'

Fantastic writing, hope you write more!

A good stroker

Wow! Great story. And the twist at the end transformed it from a pattern incest story to something I hope has another chapter! We’ll done.

I hope there is a part 2, well done.

A pity that bit about pre-cum. Cliche and less than honest.

Nice twist at the end. Good story

Very funny and entertaining!

A great story. Very hot. Please go.

Fun and sexy as Hell!

Very nice, eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Well done!

great story, great start

Fantástica historia, y divertido final!

Why was Debbie so upset towards her brother because their father had told about her giving some money ...if that was it?

Creative and definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Great story — more, please.

Good premise.

But Meh.

Sex rushes ahead. Needs to slow down. And then slow down again.

No real foreplay. No teasing. No reluctance to be overcome.

Needed all of that. Needed dialog about what might happen. Needed dialog about how he was managing without sex -- with his sister, not just theit Dad. Needed her suggesting that perhaps she could help him feel good, it he was interested. Needed her telling him how she's noticed how he drools over her breasts and nipples. Needed her commenting that he sure got hard fast from nothing more than a regular massage. He must be horny as hell. When was the last time he had sex?

Does he masturbate? Has he ever masturbated thinking about her? What does he envision happening? What does he imagine doing to her? What does he imaging her doing to him?

So much in the way of thought processes and details are missing.

Three stars.

Excellent story. It got my precum running. Thanks