All Comments on 'My Son the Champ "Rematch"'

What could have been a great story you ruined it completely. I'm sorry to tell you, but I'm really disappointed with this one.

GREAT STORY MY SON THE CHAMP REMATCH,

EXCELLENT WRITING NEXT PART PLEASE

GREAT STORY, GET THE NEXT ONE READY

thanks for the nice comments, feel free to poke me a mail with suggestions for a sequal.

as for the neg comment, i really would like it if you could mail me what exactly you didn't like, after all that might be more usefull to me then just a you suck :p

I loved this story, and the fact that it was longer then the first mad it that much better. I hope you do more Stories like this

Thank you Hulkster!

is donkeypunch for real

You really ruined the story by turning his mom into a cockney hungry slut, there’s non real intimacy there anymore

Hands down, this is the worse ending I've read in a story on this site in a long time. Not only did you whore the Mom out to her son's coach, you also whored her out to his own enemy. And at his Coach's own suggestion no less, which as a former martial artist and boxer, I have to say the Coach's reason for wanting to call of the match was full of crap and nonsensical. And yet the greatest insult to all of this is that the Jeff was still denied the pleasure of his own mother's body, even though he clearly wanted her (and more than just for sex). Which gives the impression that you essentially pussied out of committing to an actual incest story, and on top of that made the son a cuck (and please don't give me that poor excuse of an attempt in the first story, it was honestly lazy).

Very sad that you would choose to ruin such a promising story, with such a cheap attempt at gratuitous sex, smh. I normally would not criticize a story this harshly, but honestly I couldn't help but do so. You should really try to do better with your future stories.Such as deciding what type of story you're going to make, and then commit to it, not branch off into something else that just cheapens the story.

Oh man , did that ever let me down. I rarely actually this might be my first time comment but Wow first story to this one. What happend. Son never got his mom but yet he won the championship. Bro come on your killing me here