- Incest/Taboo
- My Son the Champ
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All Comments on 'My Son the Champ'
by Gamina
- 16 Comments
Pornguinover 15 years agoIt could lose a few paragraphs, but is otherwise a very good story I could give five stars for. There is a possibility for a sequel.
Anonymousover 15 years agoThis was a very good story and I must say, I am amazed that english is your 4th language. Aside from not knowing the spelling mistakes you made(edited), you write better than a lot of "english as a first language" writers around here lol.
Please continue to write, I enjoyed the story enormously.
motherfucker74over 15 years agoJust a few times you used the wrong word "Where" instead of "Wear", and there was one slight inconsistency at the end, but all in all it was a good story. Made me cum before I got to the end so for that you get a 100.
Anonymousover 15 years agoTotally enjoyed your story. I'd love to see you follow up on it, by making mom completely submissive to son. Oh, and to have son win the rematch with the guy who beat him in his Thai boxing match.
Anonymousover 15 years agoAfter the hot tub, she had her bikini on, She took it off and then in the hallway she pulled off her panties?? Who wears panties under a bikini???
Anonymousover 15 years ago"My Son the Champ"? No, YOU are the CHAMP!!!
Great Storybuilding like i've read here on literotica.com only a few times, very exciting story, only the end comes too soon.
Please keep on writing, not necessarily a sequel but i would love to read similar built stories written by you in the future!
English is my second language, but i would be proud to deal with it as good as you do!!!
feliciacosminaover 15 years agoI wonder how a story told in your first language would look like! Keep writting!
Anonymousover 14 years agoWow! You are good! Amazing how masterly you take this delicate subject being only 26.
Anonymousabout 13 years agostory should mom vs son wrestling. want some amazon mother who can defeat her son. mom son wrestling match should be more erotic attractive than anything........
Anonymousalmost 13 years agomy son is a mma fighter and this story makes it so much harder not to act on my urges
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoGood entrance, nice setup, not slow or fast. Then BOOM on the second page everything is done is a couple of paragraphs. Such a good start too.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoShe had already taken off her panties though.
Good pace, great story.
As English isn't you're first language, you did an amazingly good job (as did your editor).
Well done. 😊🙏🙏😊
Markthegeekover 1 year agoSimply AWESOME,creative in having both Mom & Son display such eagerness and imagination in the creation of his new Cock Slut.I love this story!
