All Comments on 'My Son's Sex Toy'

by billwells1

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redlion75redlion75over 6 years ago
How

If they were in a 69 how did he cut on her ass,have you ever tasted petrol jelly before,during or after a bj

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 6 years ago
NO way to treat your mom.

Even if mom likes the sex, don't treat her like a whore. And the names , fucking slut, filthy whore, cocksucker. Hey have some respect. not my kind of story BUT, not a bad read. 3 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
i didn't like it

dom/sub is a turn off adds nothing is NOT erotic. I want a woman not a little girl skip the shaved cunt. high school little boys like little girl pussys...

Cyberwolf74Cyberwolf74over 6 years ago
great stroke story.serious turn on

Very hot story. I read some of the more neg comments..ignore this story was hot hot hot some people see. To forget this is fantasy. Adding you to fave authors will read the rest of your stuff

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
Not bad just keep trying and you will get !!!^*!^*!

M U C H ....... B E T T E R .........THANKS

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pretty good,

A very good concept and story, but all stories with a so-called massive cock leave me cold. It sounds like such a juvenile wish. Other than that I might have finished it, but when his cock is as big around as her arm, that's a bit much. Don't give up, just tone down the monster cocks.

HotForLitHotForLitalmost 4 years ago
Excellent 👍👍

Would have loved it to be a number of chapter's kind of story 😉

Very hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I never ceases to amaze me, the level of obsession with bald pussy by all of the authors. It's disgusting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
rushed

why did you bother writing that story. you seemed to be in a hurry to get it finished you should have let someone else write it

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I write very amateurish fantasy for my own amusement and hopefully for others. I am strictly a two-fingered typist, so stories take hours to complete and sometimes finish due to cramping, resulting in careless editing and sudden stops. I attempt to present views from bo...