All Comments on 'My Submissive Little Sister Ch. 02'

Keep this story going you have a talent dont stop!

another excellent chapter. i can't wait for more.

Another great chapter. Keep this going! The mix of erotic and naive is a tension builder. Good stuff!!

Fully enjoying this story. Looking forward to reading the future chapters.

please keep this going!!! i love the slow pace!

i love this! this is great! Please keep the slow pace and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write about the spanking and the movie! great teases

Great story and love how slowly your taking this, can't wait for the next chapter

This is mine. The slow tease is totally tantalising. I read it and I want it to go faster but then I don't. Anticipation can be a wondrous thing.

Love the read! Please continue!

Thanks for writing!

You write awesome first (and occasionally, second) chapters and then abandon the storyline. Would love to have you finally finish one so I could finish one, too!

Simply beautiful. The way a D/s relationship should start. I wish I was little sister with such a knowledgeable big brother. He doesn't seem hell bent on rushing and finding reasons to punish and hurt her. Taking it slow and easy. The way training should be. Brent would not have done it this way and she would not experience the fullness of what she is experiencing. You write very well. Love it.

2nd time reading this. Now I think he is going too slow. Slow is good first time but he is going too slow. I just had my first experience with a Dom or at least he called himself a Dom but it felt more like a vanilla relationship. This writing is what I had hoped for but not what I got. Instead it was not that different than any other vanilla sexual experience.

Loving this story.

WTF? Too much useless bullshit writing. Whole fucking chapters of just redundant nonsense. Chapter 3 and they still haven't even fucked. That's lame and now I don't even want to read anymore. Stupid jack ass.

totally disagree with comment about the bullshit. My sister also need to be brought along slowly and encouraged to enjoy her participation. To fast and it would have scared her. You are doing it right

Apart from the kind of biologically improbably description of breasts, although I certainly haven't seen enough to make any sort of definitive judgement myself, this is an enjoyable story so far.

You have a gift for writing. Very rare to see such excellent, finely detailed descriptive writing combined with full 3 dimensional characters. I hope you keep writing..

Like that the big brother is trying to save his little sister, but it kind of spends way too much time playing head games. If she wants to be submissive, than make it so.