by Dani-Amande
Great story and well told. Now, tell us about later in the city, please.
AH DANI, SUCH TALENT FOR MAKING IT SEEM SO REAL. NO MINDLESS CRUDE TERMS, JUST AN ARTISTICALLY BUILT EXCITEMENT THAT COMBINES OUR FANTASIES, WITH POSSIBLE SUMMER EXPERIENCES WE HAVE LIKELY KNOWN. WHAT A FINE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN YOUR WORK AND THE BORING, TOTALLY WISHFUL THINKING AND THEREFORE NOT EXCITING STORIES ALL TOO FREQUENTLY DISPLAYED. PLEASE WRITE MORE. THE CLEARINGS, THE MEMORIES OF MASTURBATING OUTSIDE AS A KID AND EVEN NOW....YOU HIT A HOME RUN FOR ME.
Loved your story, it was awesome. Well written and very hot.
Please, oh please write a sequel, this one was so fucking hot!
Good storytelling. Just snatches of moments across a month, but those are the moments that make a month stand out against a whole summer.
I must say that those intense moments made me hope you will add some to the story someday.
Simply incredible!!!! I could relate to this as when younger, my family and my cousins would spend time together at a lake and she is so beautiful that I would,even to this day, let her do ANYTHING she desires to or with me. I love her sooooo much. thank you for this experience!