by MrNiceguy777
Loved your story. And the ending clearly illustrates the old adage, be careful what you wish for!
Great to come across another buy who likes to piss in a woman's mouth. Well done, good writing.
You know I never comment on any story but Wow this story literally fulfills all my fantasies and fetish.I wish I could get to do all this kinky things with a girl like this.The story was very well written , didn't like the end though,would have preferred them to start dating.I want to do everything like you mentioned above but wanna end up marrying that girl.Again really loved the story , keep up the good work.Cheers