All Comments on 'My Toy Story'

From the start I found this a very well crafted story my only complaint being I wish the build up could have been a bit longer. Perhaps a little deeper character developement before the beginning of their evening together. The sex was very intense, each scene well written. I enjoyed how her inner thoughts were often in conflict what she allowed to come out of her mouth. Nice story hope for more.

My Toy Story is more like "My Coming Out Story." What a lovely way for a "baby-lez" (just 18) to be awaken to her sexuality. Thanks Otazel, this was a good read

That can't rate this higher than a five. :-)