All Comments on 'My Voyage of Discovery Ch. 15'

Yeah, 5 stars. Damn that was good.

Tess (uk)

As an ex-editor May I suggest ---

You wrote, "Francesca went back to the cabin to collect Belle."

This confused me, for a moment I thought it was their, i.e Francesca's, cabin.

This might have been better, "Francesca went out to release Belle." [As in 'out' of the head, aka bathroom.]

Great chapter. Good to see Francesca and with Bells this time.

Yet again Lynn ignoring the sanctity of SAFE WORDS by treating further punishment if Belle said "Crackerjack"! Surely Joshua should say something to her?

I wish this was the voyage that never ended.