All Comments on 'My Whipping Ch. 06'

Great continuation of this very well written story. I do have one criticism, though. Why did the narrative change from the first person just before the end, and then revert to Susan picking up the narration again? It didn't spoil the overall effect for me, but I am a pedantic schoolteacher, and old habits die hard! Despite this little blip, I have no hesitation in giving this chapter 5 stars