- Loving Wives
- My Wife and Goddess
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All Comments on 'My Wife and Goddess'
by Bakeboss
- 24 Comments
Anonymousover 15 years agoTotally unbelievable and poorly written. If it is remotely based on real life I suggest you get urgent help.
Anonymousover 15 years agoYeah, he's in over his head for sure, but he's not much of a man.
Anonymousover 15 years agoRelated to those other idiot want-to-be writers? This story is trash and a waste of space.
Anonymousover 15 years agoPlease take pity on yourself and all of the loyal readers of literotica and QUIT writing this crap. If you really have the desire to write, do a topic that you seem to be well versed in,GAY! You can't be a stranger to sucking dicks and taking it up your Azz.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI just stepped in something very bad, excuse my while I wash off my shoes. You do come off gay, you might try that angle.
Anonymousover 15 years agoCouldn't have been worse unless you really work at it - again.<P>
Suggest you wait until you are 13 and /or come out of the closet soonest - until then - stop it - just read for your and all of our sakes.
Anonymousover 15 years agoWhat is the clinical term for your type of mental illness?
Anonymousover 15 years agoWhat is the clinical term for your type of mental illness?
Anonymousover 15 years agoGetting your jollies by indulging your complete lack of self-esteem has to be the saddest thing ever. Possibly the most pathetic piece of crap I have ever read.
RAVIGULERIAover 15 years agoReally Pathetic raised to the power of n where n tend to infinity
Is there any redeeming feature
Bazzzover 15 years agoI got about halfway through this one and thought, "Good God! If this guy left the public comments button on yes the evangelical KKKs are going to have a field day. When I finished the story and read the usual ridiculous comments that they leave I knew I was right. My suggestions are that you should build up the story better. A more developed plot can really make a story great. Use your imagination and take your time and you will be surprised how erotic a story you can write from the submissive's point of view. Oh yes, one other thing, have fun when you write and of course, ignore the evangelicals.
Anonymousover 15 years agoIn your profile you claim that stories like the ones you write are fiction and can't possibly happen right? Well this author and yourself share something in commen you both secretly perhaps want to be a cuckold and a wimp well please do so on your own profile page and on your own story time. The scores don't lie if we don't like something then we let you know. Your scores are probably similar.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoone of the most depressing stories i've ever read. if that was your goal, you did very well indeed.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoOne of the worst on this site. No rhyme or reason for anything that happens. Like the author threw darts at a board that had phrases on it.
