All Comments on 'My Wife's Sister'

Tell me where she's buried, I'll piss on her grave for you.

Well written, and very interesting.

Thought that this was a thoughtful story about forgiveness and the scale of what is really important. I know that the 'kill the bitch' purists won't be happy, but it should at least raise the question: if you knew that someone was going to die in a certain timeframe, and they had made a one-time mistake, could you forgive them? (BTW, I was expecting that she would have picked up AIDs from one of the boys who gang-banged her...)

The premise is a bit on the thin side, i.e. the single sister dragging out her married sister to go clubbing three nights a week. But as soon as I say that a premise is unbelievable, then something shows up in the paper or on TV in real life that is TEN TIMES more implausible! LOL!

She spends 4 nites a week for weeks in bars drinking and dancing with other men, essentially dating, gets so wild one night she and her sis get gang banged and hubbie takes her back because it was a mistake?? She asked for everthing that happened to the point of intending her conduct. Mistake?? Disturbing he let it get that far without kicking her ass in the first place. Then, no wife with a week to think about it would tell a husband she liked it with the 4 guys, like she did, unless she wanted a divorce, wanted to be beaten to death, or was nuts. Seems like he was more upset about her lying to him than her admitting she liked getting gang banged. Wife material??

how writers almost use blatant, unrelated RED HERRINGS as the answers to original problems that have nothing to do with those red herrings. <p>

they, in some predictable logic, go on to end the story ABOUT the red herrings, forgetting that they had started out with a very different story about a very different set of problems, that NEVER got talked about or explained! <p>

i mean, the stories are typically: <p>

my beloved, formerly faithful wife went out, fucked 5 strangers in one night. she came home and cried her eyes out and went to live with her sister, 'cuz she's too ashamed of her behavior; no that's not true. she said she LOVED the experience of having stranger big and small dicks shoved savagely into her, all night long. but she also loved me to death. <p>

oh, guess what? it's not all her fault; it's her sisters, too! oh, but guess what, too? she has a fast spreading cancer! 5 months later, she died! God, I loved that woman!

i mean, wtf!

story for this one C2C.<BR>

Let's wait and see...

The one thing I would have done is spoken to the sister when they had gone out on the first date. I know the husband said he was busy and he gave up on the wife but sorry if you truly love and need someone you fight tooth and nail for them. I would find out where they went and basically spoil their fun. I would also make sure that my wife knew exactly how I felt nothing would be hidden. Anyway well written story. I just have a nagging feeling that if I had kids and they knew my wife had been gang banged that they wouldn't forgive quite as easily as they did.

I think it's a very good story. Human beings make mistakes. I know, have been there. Caught up in situations that should/could have been avoided when inhibitions are lowered by alcohol. In my case, nothing went really too far but I know that it was not my "thinking" that prevented it from happening. Up to a certain point it's somewhat exciting cause it's out of the ordinary, out of the usual same old day-to-day routine, and beyond that point you don't really think anymore, it becomes like indifferent and you let yourself get carried away, only to realize with great shame afterwards that it was so close to disaster. Yes, mistakes happen and the only way to avoid making them is to avoid ending up in situations which may bring you to this crucial point. Her biggest mistake was letting her sister come between her and her husband and take so much time away from their marriage. In many of these stories, the wife feels neglected and looks outside the marriage for ... for what exactly. Not for that warm feeling one can get when coming home, seeing the one(s) you love, interact with them and feel glad that you are there for them and they are there for you. You don't find that in bars. Shifting priorities just makes people grow apart and leads, eventually, to a break-up. He could have acted sooneer or stronger and given her an ultimatum, their marriage without much interference from her sister or a separation/divorce. But then what? In his frame of mind, he trusted his wife and was himself not inclined to end their marriage. He tried to make her see the "gentle" way, but got yelled at and they just drifted further apart. It was all her doing, for the thrill, for the "need" for something else, something "more" until ... to paraphrase another author here, consequences are a bitch. As for the cancer, the fact that she ignored the symptoms when spending so much time with her sister doesn't seem really relevant here. Even he seems to think so (and are many of us not doing the same). But that other feeling is also human and I'm sure we all have been in situations thinking "what if ? ..." Congratulations C2C for this grat story. G.Belgium

I do believe that by the second time she refused to make space for me on her crowded schedule I would have either exploded or sat down and tried the"we have to talk" bit and then probably exploded!

<P> I am not asking for you to add a chapter but I would like

to point out that perhaps the story would have been even more intriguing if told from either Brenda or Marie's POV. I am really much more curious about what they could have been thinking about. After all the formation of new bonds was almost a given from Marie's POV, so what did she want? Just Company or a Wing man?

<P> Thanks, I really enjoyed it!

Very realistic story. I love the way you get the emotions flowing strong early in a story. Bet a lot of the folks here won't like it, but I did.

Good one, but I think it may be in the wrong category. It's seems more fitting to the non-erotic category. Other then that it's equal parts tragic & probable.

Beautiful job. The story is a heartbreaker, but tell us more - what happens to him next? What about Marie? How does she feel about monoploizing her sister's time and letting her ignore the symptoms she haould have gone to the doctor with? Please Write an epilogue at least!

I lost my soulmate, my love, my everything to Cancer six years ago... I see her face in my mind, I feel her being within my body, I have her love in my heart, I will love her forever and ever and ever....

I always like happy endings but sometimes the situation doesn't allow it. Well told story! Thanks for posting it.

Another good story from this author - sad for the husband, yet he should not have wimped out on making corrections/consequences to the slut wife's behavior. As far as the slut wife - she did their bane relationship a favor & went out of the picture so he could start over. The sister - needs to have some adequate consequences tattooed to head. Funny, no one pointed out that both sisters were natural sluts -hereditary or a product of their environment?

A few thoughts. A twenty year marriage at the time of the funeral. The marriage started to unravel two years prior. The children were born during the marriage so the oldest would be 18 at the best, when the unraveling began. The daughter is the youngest and is expecting their first grandchild at funeral. So, if the daughter got married before the unraveling of the marriage, she would be 16 or younger, cause the husband and wife weren't planning her marriage during the unraveling. Also, the son was at the funeral with his girlfriend. What happened to Jill and his son's marriage that the couple went to and then took a cruise to have a second honeymoon. Also, in this two year time frame, the couple took six months to become acquainted intimately after the cheating and afterwards, went to their son's marriage and took their cruise. Then after a bit of time, the wife is diagnosed with cancer and after another bit of time, she dies. It appears to me, taking into the time frames built into the story, that the wife hooked up with her sister, trashed her husband and destroyed her marriage in a period of time of less than a year, being generous to the wife. It doesn't appear to me that alcohol was what was driving the wife. For her to do the things she did to the husband, there was some premeditation going on. Especially taking into account hooking up with her younger sister after an 18 year absence. I just wonder if the counseling was for the events prior to the cheating or the cheating itself.

Your one of the best on here for a reason, very good stories. I don't know what I would do and can't see my wife ever cheating on me but if it happened I would be hard pressed as what to do. Can't live with them,can't live without them comes to mind, but if you work on your marriage every day hopefully thinks stay good. 25 years so far and I still tell and show her how lucky I am she loves me. Thanks for your effort.

c2c:<p>I always look forward to your submissions because I find them pleasant to read. This story was no exception. But I do have to qualify my enjoyment of it.<p>I appreciated the story beginning at its end. It made me want to find out what had happened that determined this conclusion. Your protagonist's introspection and reflection regarding the story's circumstances as they unfolded were presented very well. He possessed substance and depth. You presented an interesting and original dilemma which he had to resolve. Were I in his situation I can honestly write that I don't know how I would react.<p>However, I did have difficulty with the rest of the characters in your story. The wife was given little to do but wail and beat her chest while begging forgiveness. Her motivation (that her husband was paying too little attention to her) for her recent behavior and her comprehensive indiscretion is pretty thin and is a path that has been trod much too often. Her epiphany regarding her long hidden sexual yearnings was tough to accept. The first time she cheats she entertains the entire neighborhood and includes her sister among that number? Regardless of alcohol intake, that would seem to go against the grain for practically everyone. For her having never strayed before, I would think it would take more than "drunk" for such a wife to behave this way. The daughter was virtually non existent. The son appeared to be two dimensional, and, I believe, soon to make "Yes, Dear" his mantra after he marries his girlfriend. I found said girlfriend to be irritating and annoying as well as domineering. Her parents' experience notwithstanding, she seemed to possess too keen a perception about marital relationships. Certainly an acumen well beyond her years. Her role in this scenario was much too intrusive. Her suggesting his culpability in this whole matter displayed just how uninformed and immature she was. The younger sister, Marie...we learn so little about her. Why was it necessary for her to include her sister in her evening activities? No unmarried girlfriends? Did she resent her brother-in-law so that she wanted to monopolize her married older sister? Or was she simply unaware of the effect all of this was having on their marriage? Did her sharing a moment of intimacy with her older sister indicate her harboring prior incestuous desires? Many questions, few answers.<p>c2c, your story was paced well and your protagonist fleshed out. It was easy to feel the angst he experienced. Your resolution was credible and realistic. There were a few edges that could have been rounded, but overall, an enjoyable read. Thanks much for your effort. And don't be such a stranger.

The plot has many holes:<p>

1) The very first thing that would happen as soon as she came home would be a doctor checkup, followed by another within 6 months to check on STDs. <p>

2) How did going out at night stop the wife from Doctor visits?? <p>

So the whole cancer is a red herring that should have nothing to do with the nights out or cheating. <p>

Next we have the not enough romance part. Where did that come from? Did Marie and Jill get together with a plan to blaim hubby (or is Jill writing her own free pass)? Perhaps this could have been dealt with if the counselling part was expanded; as it stands the story doesn't make sense. Why did Marie develop this sudden need to take her sister out?<p>

A weak plot can be overcome by strong characterization, but not these characters. Both Husband and Wife are coasters, Son is as well. Jill seems way too strident on her first meeting with her in-laws. It took until after the funeral for the husband to have his epiphany that Marie is self-centerred!! [Why did he first assume that she wanted to walk with him?]<p>

I look forward to the author's next story being back to his good standards.

<p>Could not like your story. I'm sorry my comment is so long, but I've thought about what I was going to say most of the day after I read it.</p>

<p>What problems I had with the story was this, to me it wasn't a story about a couple who reconciled from a big problem in their marriage, but the story seem to be a <i>forced</i> reconciliation that had the two of them put back together when nothing in the story seemed supported them remaining married. At best it looked like he was too scared to live alone in his mid forties than it did because forgiving her made sense. If this had happened to "normal" people they would be divorced. There were so many points that kept me from enjoy the story that I just couldn't list them all.</p>

<p>But let me hit a few of the major ones around the characters for example:</p>

<p> - I didn't like Jeff the husband. I didn't like him because first he goes on about how he didn't know if he could stay married to a wife who cheated on him. He was broke up about it, but dodging facing the truth. That didn't bother me. But what did was when he was faced with finding out she did a gang bang for four men, he didn't react to it in a way that made sense. The character allowed himself to be pressured into making the decision to take his wife back with-in 24 hours of hearing about what she did. He allowed a perfect stranger (Jill) to convince him he shared at least an almost 50% part of his wife infidelity. Who tries to work on their marriage for months, has their wife do a gang bang (that she admits to you is secret fantasy), and then lets them all pressure him into making a immediate decision to stay married? If her cheating bothered his character so much he would have thought about it without everyone sitting around him waiting for an immediate answer, if it didn't bother him all that much why did he ever bring it up?</p>

<p> - I didn't like Brenda the wife. I mean you spent almost 2 pages on why not to like Brenda, but other than crying after she got caught, then trying to pretend it never happened after counciling, and then passing away from Cancer she really never did anything to make me like her. The above actions are all incidental to what she did. What she did was start to drift away from her husband. When he realized it, he tried to get her to draw back to him. She resented it (according to the story) and argued with him about it. This was months before she cheated. According to the story he only gave up begging her to spend time with him so that they could have some peace during the time she was willing to spend with him. The story offers she did a gang bang because she was drunk, but if you think about the story: She went to a bar with her sister. She picked up 4 men with her sister. They knew they were going to someone's house for sex. She had the presence of mind to call her husband and make up an alibi so she could have sex with these men. She had sex all night, into the next morning, and apparently broke off a piece into the next afternoon. Then when she comes home she continues her lie, until her husband bust her on it. Then she's all tears because now that she knows her husband Jeff knows she fears being divorces so she runs and tearfully tells everyone who hears her story about 10% of what happened so that they will take her side, and even when they hear the full dirty truth of what she's done, everyone immediately appears to team up against Jeff. Nothing in the story (save her death) made me feel like she deserved any sympathy. I when I see how everyone flocked to her regardless of what she's done, I felt like she manipulated everyone around her to pressure her husband to take her back.</p>

<p> - Mark the son. While I could understand him wanting his parents to stay married in the story, he clearly took his mothers side from his introduction. First he had an 'inkling' that his mother cheated, but once he found out she pulled a train with 4 men she didn't know for over 12 hours, and almost 24, he was against his Dad even getting a spare moment to think about it. The story had him pressuring the father to stay married. Enough so that it gave the appearance that the father was stranded at his apartment till they worked out the marriage. I find it hard to believe that any child would be that selfish that the only thing they could think about is "they" don't want to be effected. All the introduced characters placed Jeff (the husband) emotional needs at a very distant last place to what Brenda did to fulfill a "secret dark" fantasy. And now that she got caught she was sorry and every rushed to judge Jeff for being upset with her. It wasn't like she forgot to put candles on Jeff's birthday cake here, her actions were pretty major.</p>

<p>- Then last, and certainly not least, was Jill. I hated her character. Her character appears to have been created for the sole purpose of keeping them together. The character knew nothing about either of them other than they were Mark's parents. She used her parents as a template to keep them together. She convinced Jeff that he was partial at fault for Brenda's gang bang, even though he offered a very "weak" defense that he was trying for months to turn around the marriage before she cheated, Jill wasn't having that, and Jeff let her browbeat him into thinking that he would be a very evil human being for not trying to get past his wifes actions. I couldn't stand this character. What the story offered up as what happened with her parents was the "mild" form of what Brenda did, yet the story had her convince Jeff this was a "minor" problem. Huh?? Your wife gets to to have a secret fantasy of being gang banged for hours, while you wait at home for her to return, thinks up a convincing lie, and Jill makes Jeff the bad guy? Nope, didn't like her at all</p>

<p>Sure people screw up. But the questions is, <i>Is the screw up too bad for them to recover from</i>? In this story the wife screwed up, and she screwed up bad, and if the husband hadn't caught her, we the reader don't know what would have happened. The story never resolved that. It raised a lot of problems and questions, but solved none. And at the end of the day you have a story where the husband saw them drifting apart, took steps to try and fix their marriage, but the wife wasn't willing to meet him half way, but it took a gang bang (that the wife secretly desired) in which the wife was caught the next <i>afternoon</i> to fix the marriage?? Huh?? Not that the husband was desperately trying to fix the marriage, but 4 other men making the wife their personal gang bang slut, was what the story used to fix the marriage. Again it never made me the reader feel that it made any sense for them to stay married.</p>

<p> The wife thought her cheating through enough to think of a convincing lie to tell the husband why she was not coming home that night, but she was too drunk to stop a gang bang? See what I mean. Drunkenness doesn't come in those levels of clarity. And the story does nothing to explain why I should like her again after her having such a good time at the expense of her marriage, possible disease (that she could have given the husband), and why the husband should ever trust her again. Just because they reconciled doesn't make it a good story if the reader still doesn't like the characters by the end of the story.</p>

<p>Sorry but I tried, and I just couldn't like any of them. Too much time was put into why not to like them, and hardly any into why I should ever like, let alone, trust any of them.</p>

-Risq

I am sad.The story was very well done.Thank you.

You showed the pain & hurt that cheating brings to both. I was extremely angry reading it. Guess I still have work to do in my recovery. The sister wasn't the one who cheated. They both blamed her & booze for her slutting. She did it. End of story.

No way Jeff would behave as he did in this story. He should have divorced her and moved on. Risq - you summed up these rather unsavory characters better than I could.

A very different story to what I had expected and one that I did enjoy reading. All too often others (like some below here) think they know it all etc etc but in fact each situation is different for us all. There were many things I could relate to in your story and most of it seemed to be reality at least from my past. Think I better head off and check some of your other stories.

I have to say this was a very good short fantasy story, but a bit more of what transpired after they tried reconciliation would have been more satisfying and make it more believable to me. The only thing we are told is they attended a counselor as a couple and one on one. We are given nothing of what was discovered or shared.<P>Brenda’s state of mind was showing her inner thoughts, if she really recognized it or not, that she wanted some of her fantasies. She is making excuses and not letting herself see the truth. She has to blame someone, as is human nature, so she makes up a scenario that works for her in her mind. Husband is not there for her, the marriage is just what happens after many years as it happens to everyone, she deserves more, he doesn’t care what she does as he doesn’t bring it up anymore (in the story he states he just gave up the struggle). She has so convinced herself Jeff is to blame for it all and has turned her feelings into hatred she wants to also strike out at him. <P>Then this dialogue is from our heroin:

<P><P>"I hate it Jeff. Hate it. Something inside me snapped that night and <b><I>I found out I liked what I did with those men.</b></I> It was the tastes, textures, sizes, and combinations I guess. It was all so different and new to me.<b><I> Deep down I loved the different things we were doing and some of them I'd always wanted to try</b></I> with you, but couldn't bring myself to ask you to. I lost myself in the whole mess and now I've lost you.<P><P>

This particular piece of dialogue hit me straight on, yet Jeff never comes back to ask about this statement of <b><I>“I found out I liked what I did with those men.”</b></I> in his questions to her. I believe he would have this sticking in his mind like no other comments she made.

She has let out a lot of her inner feelings to Jeff without really understanding how much this has hurt him to his very core. She knows she detest herself and has to let Jeff know how much it hurts her what she has become, in her own words a <b>SLUT</b>. She knows she really wants what they once had and he should understand she truly is sorry so he will understand eventually. As is almost always the case the perpetrating partner has no real concept of the depth of horrifying pain the offended partner feels right now. Her words are as devastating as a blunt object that has penetrated to his core. He is in shock! It may be a fatal injury in many cases.

<P>She knows she hates what she has done to her best friend and wants to forget it and move on. She truly believes she would never do anything like this again to hurt her best friend and the man she has spent so many good years and children with. This is the wrong thing that many people do. They will never be able to forgive themselves or be truly happy without confronting what makes this fantasy so strong.<P>

They can go on with a relationship that is as caring as they can make it, but the reality is she knows she must always prove to him her devotion and still she lives with the hate of what she did that brought them to this <b><I>love with guilt</b></I>. She lives with the guilt, he lives with the suspicion that she may someday want her fantasy, of other men and whatever else is involved at least one more time.<P>Ok, here is where I say she needs to find out what it is she really wanted and why it turned from a fantasy to an actual passion. With the nudge of a good therapist she can come to grips with what she felt and hopefully a little<b><I> insight to what she really wants to be happy</b></I>. If the two of them can discuss what she has found to be why she is drawn to her fantasy and actions, it is then that they both can see what it probably will take for them to start anew. Jeff’s point of view must be addressed with answers he can accept, <b><I>as he also must decide what he requires to go forward</b></I>.<P>We all know you cannot give love when you have a distinct dislike of yourself. Brenda cannot survive with her carrying unbridled guilt and suffering inside, and Jeff wary of the supposed next time. The marriage will be just a disease unattended and eventually leaving nothing to be done but let it die in apathy. You cannot go on and be happy if you carry around guilt unending. They both have to feel they understand what went wrong and then and only then, can they both forgive one another and themselves. <P>Of course you never forget but you must truly forgive to be able to move on. It doesn’t happen overnight but with time and mutual understanding it will come and even grow to a new strength between them.<P>Your writing is fantastic along with the inestimable effort you display. I may find some things a little unsettled in my mind, but I love to read what you give us. Thank you for the wonderful entertainment!<P>With great respect!<P>PT

Risq summed the entire mess up better than I ever could. Unlikeable characters, every one, even the son and daughter in law. I can't like a story when I can't find a single decent character. Kill 'em, let God sort 'em out.

She said the Gangbangers bought her some drinks and paid attention to her like her husband didn't (probably cause she was always cattin' at a bar). "They complimented us and made me feel beautiful and sexy." LOL, pulls a train for some drinks and compliments? Wife's not only a whore, she's a cheap, barfly whore. Imagine the first time a guy with money pays attention to her, she'll be gone for as long as the cash lasts. And then I can just imagine my wife saying this to me, "I had sex with four men I didn't know, and I used no protection at all. I even enjoyed part of it...at one point I heard myself begging for more. I was such a slut...I don't deserve you...I don't deserve to live." I'm afraid I'd have to take her up on that one. Especially after Brenda then describes the different sizes, combinations and textures. ICKY. But Brenda lived and he took her back. Double Icky!!

what a pathetic review by PT... I mean its a new low is stupid!!! PT Correctly points out Brenda really wanted a gangbang and the marriage would be racked by Love by Guilt IF shew had lived... then PT suggested some sort of therapy/ marriage counselling.

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what the FUCK is that Idiot PT talking about? This author was DETERMINED from the get go the allow reconciliation at ANY cost.

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PT reviews a story where the wife has to at least pay SOME if very minor consequences to her reprehensible actions. But that is NOT what this author wrote!!!

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Of PT is part of the "wife can whore around however and whenever and with whomever and the husband always has to take her back" crowd so its no wonder he gave this wretch putrid awful story a 100

AS Usual with this author there are NO consequences for the whore wife. None. The Cancer death is 10000% irrelvant... but a susual TRICK by this bankrupt idiot of an author that cant get a simple plot right.

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jeff's is such a Loser and wimp that the anger is Misplaced at the sister.... as if SHE caused the Cancer. But at the Funeral... knowing what the sister did when the sister says THIS

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"Jeff... How are you holding up?" there isnt a straight man in America that would not of Kicked Maria in her snatch then spit in her face.

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The wife consciously decides to Leave her husband and become a party whore. She LIED often:

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1 where she was the night before on he telephone

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2 that she was too drunk to say No

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3 where she was when questioned by jeff when she came home

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4 what she told the kids family and friends when Jeff tossed her whore ass out

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Thus when she says well I didnt intend to so this when the evening started... WHY would Jeff believe that?

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WHY would Jeff Believe that this is the ONLY time the whore wife had done this?

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would you?

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WHY would jeff let Jill Browbeat him into thinking ANY of this His fault? THAT is never explained.

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Jeff is never able to put together a rational cogent argument against a scumbag like Jill.

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Finally the idea of JILL acting as a therapist is so offensive that the mind boggles. Except for crying a few days what has the wife lost? She got her sexual fantasy fufilled... got the chance to lieve the life a single sexually active whore for MONTHS,... and totally separated herself from her husband.

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NO consequences. None. Zip.

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<b>When Jeff had that phone call WHY was he still there in the Morning/ midday when the whore came home? what more proof did he he need to show she didnt love him anymore...?</b>

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awful putrid vile nasty wretched story

There arent the words to describe how absurd and awful this story. Frankly JPB or that Zeke asshole writes better plots.

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Or perhaps I should say: long, GENTLE and MIND-READING assessment. <p>

how do YOU know this was the ONLY and FINAL time she would cheat? actually, how do you know she WAS THINKING that way? <p>

i mean, everthing Harry said was on target: about the lies, the constant and persistent lies, until every lie has been explained away by the stupid husband --- amazing he founds ALL the explanations to all the lies and knew they're all lies... <p>

but, as Harry also said, NOTHING can explan the husband and the AUTHOR's use of the fast-spreading cancer AND DEATH as both explanation AND ABSOLUTION for the cheating, lying, and general as well as SPECIFIC disrespect for the wimp husband and DISREGARD for his health. <p>

you can't go fucking --- via vagina and ass --- multiple promiscuous men and women and come home and fuck your spouse and thin it is either going to be awesome or kinky or okay! <p>

that's the message, both explicitly and implicitly, from BOTH the wimpish husband and THE AUTHOR. <p>

the son and the little woman doing impromptu counselling session with the "angry"/"bitter" wimp/husband, to me, was so bizarre and idiotic, I don't even care. In fact, I just skipped over that total insane part of the story, because it was obviously NOT meant to be real or believable. <p>

any young man who's been told by his "upset mother" a whole bunch of lies one day and the next, found that contrary to her vomit, the case was that she and her sister went on a few orgies and SHE tearfully told the husband/the boy's father, SHE LOVED ALL THOSE EXCHANGE OF BODILY FLUIDS with such promiscuous --- any young man who, after hearing that, wants to do an improvised, heartfelt, simulated counseling session with the husband/father, in hope of bringing him around, because the wife/mother is already "suffering enough" ("look at her tears!"), such a boy needs to have his nuts cut. <p>

surely, we can't divorce our parents, but such mother would get little or no respect from me ever again, even if she became another Mother Teresa for the remainder of her days: that would bring love and peace of mind to poor and desperate souls, but it would never repair, in my hope, what she did -- in a calculated, cold-blooded way --- to my father, acts that she said she, despite her semi guilt, found amazing, deeply satisfying, thrilling, and loving! <p>

again, as I said before, I don't know supposedly educated men and women writers us RED HERRINGS as explanations for originally problems THEY THEMSELVES set up as the basis of their stories ---- I will never understand.... <p>

and BOTH the sister and the cancer WERE/ARE red herrings to the original problems of the wife loving her gangbanging orgies and her lies and her disregards for the husband's thoughts or physically health. <p>

in fact, even just by reading it, when I came upon the scene where he frantically tore her clothes off and started sucking her vagina --- I wanted to vomit: how could you be sucking a vagina where recently it's been stuffed by a whole bunch of dicks, big and small, black and white, filled with trillions of little squirming viruses, bacterias, germs,,,, some of which were/are quick vicious? <p>

that's not an act of romance,,, it's just gross and dangerous and sheer mindlessness...

As with some of my stories in this catagaory, the comments are great fun, superb, all of them.

However in this case, not as good as the story.

Great,,,well done

Keeps her after she takes on 4 guys for drinks and compliments. Better never let her near the school yard. Never know what she'd do for those old guys if they gave her a lollipop.

How do you forgive and accept a wife who ignores you, goes off first one night a week on girls nights then winds up on three nights a week away from home and husband. Then when the husband tries to get her to stop and to go out with him and be with him she loses control and argues with him. When she is caught in her infidelity she confesses to having sex with four men and her sister all because she drank to much. She also admits she enjoyed and liked the sex. Now she wants forgiveness and to come home. There is nothing to say she hasnt been bedding men all along on these nights out and is only admitting the one she got caught in. She came home all cleaned up and happy. She wasnt upset until she realized hubby knew what she had been doing. No rape charges were filed. Bareback sex with four men, she was a sperm depository for analysis. She went to the home and drove herself home, she knows where the sex occurred. It wasnt rape, therefore it was consensual sex. How many months would she have to undergo testing before she could even consider sex with her husband six months, twelve? Jill forcing the issue of her coming home when the husband fears for her safety due to his righteous anger is a very poor choice not a good one. Her saying the husband let the romance go out of the marriage and wife started going out and finally got bedded was his fault is a load of crap. The wife has just as much responsibility to the marriage as does the husband, and when the husband attempted to romance her she forced him to withdraw. Attempting to blame her actions on the cancer is implied with it may have affected her head is hogwash. She was going out with her sister earlier on and such an attempt is in very poor taste. Had I been the husband I would have told her at the son's home I was glad she is safe and I am filing immediately for divorce based on incompatibility, and would be willing to divorce on adultry charges if she so desired. There really wasnt any hope of a real marriage and no man with any brains at all would slip into a forced reconciliation suggested by a young girl to such an unloving and slutty wife. The pull of the drawstrings on the cancer is neat, personally I thought she would be killed in a car crash going to see a shrink. I am not sure why the husband even spoke to the sister or even allowed her into his home? I have family relations that I dont speak to based on a lot less than what that slut did. Girls nights out, no matter what anyone says, usually wind up with women out looking for guys to play with. Any wife going on them has to be suspect in her actions especially if the with drinks a lot and is out late. Put nicely any time spent out the marriage is taken away from the marriage!

The author did a good job with the characterizations, his prose is good (though a couple of spots need some polishing), and the storytelling is fine. The plot's a bit unusual because we're expected to believe that the hubby would take her back after multiple dalliances. And laying the blame on Marie is nothing more than the lame excuse of "The devil made me do it." As a being with free will, the devil didn't make her do it, she willingly chose her own path. That she came to a bad end was unfortunate but ignoring one's own health is a seldom a wise idea. The story kept my interest, and I thank you, curious2c, for an entertaining read.

to fuck off and get out of his house

The only way this could have been made worse would have been to make the husband a willing cuckold. You already have him as a wimpy little bitch by letting some snot nosed brat half his age or less tell him HOW to live HIS life. What the fuck is that about? So her parents go divorced. Big fucking deal. If she orders the old man around like that, imagine what kind of a feminazi she must be towards his pathetic son. "Mom wouldn't let me call you from 300 miles away to find out what exactly happened." Fucking pathetic. When a person decides to read any kind of story, they expect the beginning to match the middle and the end of the story. If the story is to have a tragic ending, then that should be foreshadowed throughout instead of just dumped on you from damn near the end. She dies of cancer. Would have been more fitting had she died of something related to her infidelity. Hell, it would have ranked as a top pick were both of them to die from said disease being that we get a long description of a wimpy ass excuse for a man fucking his faithless slut of a wife. I don't know where in the world men are such lowly, miserable creatures without the ability to defend one's self in the face of a horrible injustice, but in my part of the world, men stand up for what they believe is right. No chance in hell they would let a dirty whore like this tramp back in to thier lives, much less ever sleep with her again. Curious, I kept reading this story hoping that at some point your main character would grow some balls, produce some testosterone and be a man. Sadly, I wasted all those precious minutes of my life that I will NEVER have again, just to be brutally disappointed. Maybe the LW section needs to be renamed the "Husband is a small dick, wimpy bitch who fails as a man, husband and lover. Watch his wife fuck the entire office and then come home and make him clean her up" section. Atleast then I would know to avoid reading such contemptable crap.

Hey Curious2c,

I just finished reading MY Sister's Wife and I'm a bit confused of where you want your story to go. That's an understatement..I was CURIOUS to see where this story was going.

To start, I agree with most of the other responses abour Jeff being a wimp. I don't believe that the male ego can hang out at the house for a week waiting for his way ward wife to come to her senses.

Most men after hearing the wife had a gang bang(and enjoyed it) would maybe simmer for a day or two. After that, a man wants anexplinations and will stalk and hunt her down.

Making Jeff a passive (for this writer) wasn't a strong choice. Think about it, why wait? Waiting just makes you crazier with wild thoughts running through your head.

You threw me off be the title and the first paragraph. I was expecting more interction with the sister but all I got was Jeff playing the blame game.

The whole Jeff and Brenda were as good as gold untill her sister Marie showed up was a hard and jagged pill to swallow. If you look at it logically, the couple in your story were having problems way before her sister came along. Or anything Marie threw their way woldn't have chipped the glass house they were living in. But as you wrote Brenda was easily tempted and bit the forbidden apple. Then she plays I didn't know what I was doing. I spread my legs and let for guys bang me. The kicker was she told Jeff she enjoyed it. That is when shes hould of lied. Instead she lied about where she was and only admitted the truth when it was right in her face. But her reaction wasn't truthfull.

Also, with Jeff being EVER so excepting of her ONE night of inhibitions. I don't know about you but I've yet to hear of a guy being so understanding( that is, unless he was in on the group sex)

Also, Jeff is your alpha-male in the story but you have him acting like a whipped puppy. You even have the son's fiancee brow beating him. I found that ridiculous and humiliating to Jeff. I mean, he just met the girl and she is berating him to the point of guilt- which he shouldn't feel- but he ends up feeling like an idiot and forgiving her. The episodes after I felt forced.

The story in general was well written. The problem was in what story you were trying to tell. After reading it there are so many possibilities.

I was hoping you'd pick up five years after the funeral where Jeff runs into Marie setting off the old hatetred. Sparking his revenge against her that he feels she deserves. I feel that Jeff and Marie are your story.

But I understand where you were trying to go with Jeff and Brenda. The problem is they didn't work and as a reader I didn't feel their connection.

I hope this helped in some way.

Now let me get this straight, he accepts she could as an adult woman, mother of his child, think it was OK, didn't think the better of it, to ignore her husband but not ignore 4 other men, and that she ENJOYED sex with the 4 other men. Really, what is the difference if she does it again or 10 or 20 more times. Are 4 guys any better than 40? Isn't the damage done? What's the point of staying married to someone who can come and go like that. And tells you she likes it?

Nothing at all redeeming about this tale.

I have a problem believing that her and sister were going out partying three nights a week staying out late and this was the first and only time she cheated on him ,very hard to believe,I know if my husband was doing that I would not believe him for a minute,why is it in most of these stories the cheater either gets caught the very first time it ever happens, or the the very time they had decided to not cheat anymore lol,

Totally unrealistic. Proof? No follow-up is proof that even you know that the premise of the story is ridiculous.

I can give you point for point why this tale stinks.

1. Wifey left a pretty lucid message. No slurring or pauses so the excuse, "I was drunk" doesn't fly.

2.Admitted she always wanted to do that.

3. She lied to son about what really happened, yet son did not seek to offer his Father comfort?

4. Son and girlfriend had no business interfering.

5. After a gangbang w/no condoms, a Doctor's visit should have been first on the agenda and I mean a full physical to see if there was a medical reason she shit on a 20 year marriage.

6. Without the physical, Hubby has unprotected sex with her (YUCK!!)

7. Your timeline was off.

Curious2c, you've turned into a third-rate Celt. His stuff is unbelievable, but at least he manages not to leave gaping holes like these.

you have to face it: We have a real writer here in the Loving Wives Forum, and your writing is absolutely engaging. Take it as a sign of encouragement that some little men (with little penises ?) masturbates under their cry for "punishment" for the "whore".

It takes two to cheat, boys. Face it, or read something light and easy.

Liked story. I agree that she should have gone to doctor first and been thoroughly examined and checked for STD. At least by starting the story at her death, there was no bad shock at the end. Also, I would have been suspicious a lot sooner. When she cut me off, got mad when I tried to become close and spend more time with her, and was increasing girls nights out drinking in bars: I would have been checking up on her. Anger, frustration, even call it paranoia would have probably sent me to spy on her.

A "ScheisseKopf" that call himself a mouse want to compare dicks? I've been stationed in Germany pal. The last man a German woman wants to fuck is a German man. Why do you think the Frauleins break their necks getting to US Army compounds?

Hell even the Brit soldiers party up in Germany!

can tell you how you feel and you know she means well.what the fucking planet you from.she a whoreslut and you dumbest fuck i ever read about.

I just came across this story and even though it's better than a year old, I really enjoyed it.

Now to the idiots and their comments. These are characters in a story not real life people. They act and react in whatever way the author decides that they should. You anonymous Andys and hate Nazis seem to want everyone, every character, and every author to write the way you want them too. All of you torch the bitch and wimp husband wannabes write your own stories and the characters can do just what you want them to. If you don't like this authors work, then DON'T READ HIS STORIES. Quit bitching because he doesn't see the world the same way you do.

Anyway Curious, I enjoyed this story, didn't really like the sad ending but that's just a matter of personal taste. I thought the story was well written, flowed well and was a good read. Thank you for your work and keep writing.

If you equate internet story commenters to perpetrators of one of the most murderous periods of recorded human history. You, the Bullet and any other jag-off who uses the term "Nazi" willy-nilly need to perform sit-ups until you hear a soft, popping sound (with any luck, it will be the noise created when your head emerges from your ass).

Nazi is exactly the right word for people who browbeat and try and instil fear in others. As nazism was also once a germ of an idea, so we are learning to stand up to the Lit Taliban and Nazi cunts infiltrating this site and often with a sinister agenda. So well done Woodmanone. I'm not a great fan of your stories but I am of your stance.

In your profile you stated that most of your stories are personal experiences and or experiences of others. Is everyone that you associate with a wimp or a cuckold? Take from my personal experience, the cheated spouse never forgives or forgets. I have been divorced for 16 years and I still have problems trusting any women completely. Any man that would take his wife back after she gang banged 4 men, just as well have himself castrated.

some kid born two weeks telling hubby how to live.this was b/s.

Brenda is a slut whore. Jeff is cuckolded. He should tell dear little Jill to shove it up her ass and kick the whore to the curve. Just another "make the husband a wimp" tale.

Good Brenda deserved to die for what she done to Jeff. Too bad you made him a wimp by takling the slut back, that ruined the story

Sucked a Fat Man's Dick; and I'm usually in favor of that! The story is what SUCKED, though! Awful! Wouldn't wipe my ass with it IF it would go through the printer! Turds usually wont....

Two whores..well, three counting Marie. Brenda, Marie, and Jill. Sorry excuse of a story. Author must have dreams of cuckolding husbands.

Tell that pushy bitch Jill to fuck off and he would be better off without her as a daughter-in-law

"Anonymous" kneejerking assholes who are too fragile in their feelings (and apparently too unsure of their manhood), too morally inert to withstand and then deal with difficult problems raised by wives who stray in different ways for different reasons?

This story was direct yet subtle! Even in the way the husband was persuaded yet dealt with a too-earnest Jill! The only fault I find with this story is their failure to close Marie out of their lives altogether during the long period of reconciliation. She's the responsible bitch who -- not intending -- nevertheless selfishly set up the situation and allowed it for weeks before and then crucially, during that crucial night. As a condition for getting back together she would have to -- by mutual agreement -- cease to exist for both of them. Too bad, but that's what she'd earned, and there is no evidence she ever experienced any regret, much less remorse.

And all you "Anon" wimps who think a pair of biceps and heaving people out is the strong and sole answer to all problems, take your fantasies elsewhere please. This is the real world, where everything has costs and benefits both.

Vickie YOU really suck maybe your the one who needs a nice melanoma to end your miserable dyke attitude!

I not saying that taking the wife back was wrong but I would have insisted that she be checked out medically for STDs and possible hormonal imbalance and this could have identified her cancer early. His wife's sister part in this is and was unforgiveable.

A blind woman could see where she was going. I've noted that C2C uses alcohol as a justification for really bad behavior. Behavior under the influence is just as bad and the person is JUST as RESPONSIBLE as when sober.

A married woman who drinks to excess when apart from her husband is just begging to lose control and get into serious trouble.

Choices made, drunk or sober have the same consequences and are NOT justification for bad behavior.

his 'neglect', that caused her to cheat, which she eventually realizes that even this 'neglect' was her fault. Like a frog in a pot of water; drop it into a boiling pot he'll notice the heat and jump out, drop him in cool water and slowly heat to boiling and he'll sit there and scald to death, never noticing the change in temperature. Not just alcohol, but we humans are always constantly under the influence of some psychoactive substance, even our own natural hormones. Once again, that doesnt justify her actions, only explains them. I thought she would cheat again and then kill herself or maybe even the jealous sister, nice red herrings, great story...

Jill can stick a used tampon up her ass. And cheating wife can burn in hell.

or for one to fail their vows. TK U ML LV NV

True hers was worse but nothing really matters in the end.

Being angry with your love does not matter when she dies.

Had she got checked when the symtoms of the cancer first appeared she might have been fine. However she was too wraped up in her game of negleting her husband with Marie revenge that she ignored the symtoms when they occured.

In this story the marriage was slowly dying from lack of communication. When your spouse starts to neglet you dont go out and cheat instead communicate. Talk to them and tell them they are taking you for granted. And be open and responsive if your spouse tells you that you are negleting them.

I read this story a long time ago and could not understand the ending till now. It is a very sad ending and this author deserves more paise than the crucifictions I just read here.

Another cuck. Why do these cucks exist? Seems like at this rate the world wont have any real men left. Thats a scary thought.

I ca not beligve the shit that i read in this story. Why is it that all women start with you never had time for me and crap like that. First it started with the wife saying it, then the future daughter n law saying it what a line of shit. All women who cheat and all there women friends all say the same it's always the guys fault. Why can women just say the truth. I wanted to fuck someone else and i did and own up to it, and that's why the cheated not there dump as excuses.

For the read.

The wife is a slut, no matter how she tried to flip things to make the wimp sucker husband the reasoning for fucking around & committing incest. I don't understand why Jim took Jill's advice, he should've just divorced her. Instead he allowed his son, his son's moronic girlfriend & his slut wife to intimidate & manipulate him into staying with the trashy whore. If the wife honestly felt ignored or unappreciated, why didn't she communicate this with her husband? How was munching her sisters twat help get her husbands attention? How was pulling a gang bang help with saving her marriage? I'm sorry but I don't like this story, it seems to me that this wife was just another selfish, preoccupied, gutter slut who enjoyed fucking others. The husband was a wimp, she fuck'd 4 guys (possibly more) with no rubber & he takes her back...! No way Jose....she was the one ignoring her husband, she put her slut bag sister ahead of him so I'm a bit confused as to why he's to blame for her slutting it up?

The wife is a slut, no matter how she tried to flip things to make the wimp sucker husband the reasoning for fucking around & committing incest. I don't understand why Jim took Jill's advice, he should've just divorced her. Instead he allowed his son, his son's moronic girlfriend & his slut wife to intimidate & manipulate him into staying with the trashy whore. If the wife honestly felt ignored or unappreciated, why didn't she communicate this with her husband? How was munching her sisters twat help get her husbands attention? How was pulling a gang bang help with saving her marriage? I'm sorry but I don't like this story, it seems to me that this wife was just another selfish, preoccupied, gutter slut who enjoyed fucking others. The husband was a wimp, she fuck'd 4 guys (possibly more) with no rubber & he takes her back...! No way Jose....she was the one ignoring her husband, she put her slut bag sister ahead of him so I'm a bit confused as to why he's to blame for her slutting it up?

It started okay but when Jill a stranger who you didn't even know existed starts to say that maybe its your fault your wife gangfucked four other men because you didn't wine and dine her, that's the time this story turned to shit.

Firstly your wife has been treating you like a piece of trash for several months, then she starts liying to you and cheats on you(it was only a one time thing , no it was a four time thing as you fucked four men you dirty slag) and because some crazy bitch tells you a shitty story about her mom and dad you decide to take the std infected slut back! No I don't think so. From the way you told this story the marriage had been in a bad state for months with them both living deprecate lives so why would he want to give it another shot? Because he loves her and his dumbfuck soon to be daughter inlaw is standing there with her hands on her hips FUCK THAT SHIT. Tell the bitch to go kill herself and get yourself the best lawyer you can pay for.

By the way what a shit place to end the story you start off building the meeting between him and Marie at the funeral and then end it with "I've got cancer and I'm going to die" did you forget the start or just couldn't be bothered to write about it?

Why the hell didn't he beat the crap out of Marie. Serious injuries are warranted

Son's fiancee was quite rational in her advice. But wife needed to get STD and HIV tests.

Son should have contacted father when his mother arrived. Husband should have given his wife an ultimatum about going out with her sister, and made it stick to avoid escalating problems. Husband and wife needed to communicate better to avoid the problems in the first place. Afraid the story was disorganized, although it had promise. Gave it a '2'.

wife sluts it up... drugs or booze are to blame... wife shows some shame and then admits that she liked some of the things she did... husband takes wife back and likes the new bedroom skills his wife has acquired.

pure schlock

Sounds like after they reconciled they had some of the best times of their marriage. I truly believe, unlike most of the people leaving comments, that after a traumatic experience like this (her having the affair) a marriage can actually be stronger. Of course, the circumstances have to be right and both parties have to be committed to working on the marriage. The reality is that those great times never would have come to fruition if not for her affair. Not saying that it was a good thing it happened, but good did clearly come from it. It was their wake up call. So in that sense, there should be no more guilt. It is in the past.

Anyway, I loved the story. Very touching.

Once she acted like a whore that is what she is. Keep her around to fuck after she is checked and cleared of disease. Then the price of her staying is being your cum dump- and nothing more. The whore obviously loved her gang bang so she stays as your whore nothing more.

Also well thought out. However the conclusions attained would not have happened. Without being my usual harsh self let me just say that the cheating wife who died of cancer should have died alone.

exactly betrayed but not exactly alone, the sister should have been inn the coffin with her, trying to claw her way out of a sound proof coffin and lying on top of the dead sister.

I would call the story 'harsh realism'. But 'realism' would have required that the wife have a complete physical, including VD and HIV tests, among others, after the orgy. the physical would have probably caught the Cancer in time for effective treatment. Sexual intercourse can also provoke cancer of the uterus. Be consistent in stories. if realistic, don't skip likely story elements that would go along with the 'realism'.

Write better tales without total downbeat themes if possible. Dan

Thought this was crap! Actually like reconcilliation stories but this one SUCKED! Disappointed because I usually really like this author!

Thought the setting was great and even the ending was good but the resolution was PATHETIC!

But the guy gets driven 300 miles to his son's house after not hearing from his wife in a week, finds out she was gangbanged and enjoyed it, told by a young woman that he JUST met that his marriage was bad before this happened and when he says they need to get a trail separation the girl says 'NO, you can't!" and what is our hero's response? 'You guys are being hard on this old man!" All in one day? Made me wanna puke!

Hmm. The reconciliation in this story was less a natural progression and more a brow-beating from his family. Who knows if that had worked in the long run? I mean, if his wife wouldn't have died from cancer relatively soon afterwards, would their relationship have stood the test of time? Personally, I don't think so, because there was too little reconciliation and too much family pressure to really work things out.

The protagonist would have needed to know the identities of the men and the address. And then again, why would you stick your dick in something that had seen all that traffic with out a test? I will not vote, This author is usually too good for that kind of disrespect.

that cantbuymy had a wonderful idea about putting the surviving sister in the coffin with the dead sister, and bury both the bitches for one price, I love it ! ! ! Saratu 1*

She says she &quot;had to be there for Marie&quot;...? Or thought she did...? What's that crap...? We were told the &quot;girl's nights out&quot; were so Marie could provide something in Brenda's life that SHE was missing... though clearly it was one of those things that you were only missing it because you had chosen something better at the time - I.e. a husband and family...

Yeah, Marie would never be welcome in MY home after that... &quot;Oh, your sister has died and you want to pay your last respects...? How about fuck off and die yourself you home wrecking Bitch...?&quot;

Okay, maybe he took her for granted, I'm sure she took HIM for granted, too!

And she says it was only the one time, at least partly caused by the alcohol. But what about all the nights out with Marie, shutting him out, getting mad at him when he complained about how much time she was spending with Marie?

And if she wasn't out drinking so much, and flirting with other guys, that night would never have happened.

One thing not mentioned was whether she was still seeing Marie. Because one of my conditions would be for her to break off ALL contact with Marie.

This sucked....screw what the skank his son is fucking things

That would have been more fitting. What a piece of shit this was. She is an incestuous cheating whore, for months, and yet you then proceed to try and turn it around on him? Rubbish!

How big a loser is he? He lets her cheat for months, (let's not kid ourselves that she was faithful up until she suddenly decided she wanted a gangbang with 4 strangers, AND her sister! Hardly all that her first time out!), without anything more than a few whiny objections? And then he lets some random stranger that happens to be fucking his son, call ALL the shots and make demands, letting HER decide how his future will go? His whore wife tells him she loved every second of her unprotected gangbang, and committing incest, then says, 'Oh by the way, sorry. Did I tell you how much I loved it?', and he bangs a few pots together, then forgives everything. Both bitches wouldn't even touch the ground, on their way to the kerb!

Can't please all the BTB people. You have to realize that you only hear the guy's point of view, and he could have been taking her for granted more than it seemed. Guys can be very dense and unsympathetic- a ring doesn't give you exclusive rights if you don't act like you care. Wishing HIV on someone? That's pretty low. I am glad they worked it out and had some good time together. Sadly, second guessing whether cancer would have been detected earlier gets none anywhere here.

why put them back together and then kill her off? why didn't you even give him aids on top? that would have finished him off just nice. and what about the slut sister?

crappy story.

ok, the bitch was dying....so fucking what.......take care of her if you must (I don't see why) but to each it's own

Not being one to lose all control after drinking, I can't understand how Brenda acted the way she did after tying one on. Now if her drinks were spiked with a drug...maybe, but that wasn't part of the story.

Next, Jill comes off as very opinionated but does she have any qualifications (other than life experience) to tell Jeff how to handle the issue?

Then, I'm not very familiar with the effects of cancer, but how can someone be terminal without knowing there's something wrong? I'm sure there are lots of symptoms, but my extended family's experiences don't show cancer acting that way.

Why did Brenda move out without any warning or indication of where she went?

" Maybe I'm being unfair. Maybe I should forgive and forget. I just can't, because Marie led my wife into a net of pain and suffering, causing us to lose precious time together, even to the point of almost tearing us apart." Are you kidding me? Here is my ending:

Stay tuned for Chapter 2 "Marie's Reconstructive Surgery"

It's hard when there are children involved, even if they are adults to just abandon a marriage. Would I have stayed with the cheating slut, no, but then the story is not about me. That said I can still sympathize and understand the motivation behind what the husband chose to do. Personally I would have divorced the slut and put her lover and her sister in the hospital at best, killed all of them at the worst. That doesn't mean that this is a bad story, it isn't, just that I would have reacted differently than the husband did.

More crap

When she came home from her romp with the guys, she was wearing her "want-to-get-laid" dress. The dress that, in the past, she had worn only when going out with dear old hubby, and ONLY when she "wanted to get laid." So, it could be a fair statement that she planned on getting laid that fateful night, wearing her sexiest dress. I also picked up on the "clues" that she could've been drugged, though it was never mentioned, but I couldn't get past her wearing "THE dress." Okay, so maybe she told herself that she just wanted to look her best while she teased the guys, but somewhere in her mind, she was thinking about knocking off a piece...

I'm just saying...

Still, a great story. 5

She claims that she didn't plan to cheat.

But when you consider the time and care women spend on choosing the clothing that they wear, then her wearing the 'get laid' dress is a real red flag.

If her husband associated it with having sex at the end of the night then most certainly the wife did as well.

When women are choosing what clothing to wear to go out they plan for an intended result.

five stars. A very sad tale.

this is the 3rd story by this author that ive read. i hated all three. i wont be reading any more of this cuck garbage.

My first wife was cheated on by her boyfriend. She wasn't able to go out with him enough so he started going to parties and finally fucked a couple of her friends. She found out, they split and she was devastated that her first love, her true love, left her behind.

Enter me. I should have know she was damaged and to some degree, I did. But not as badly as I found. After only 9 months of marriage, I came home from work one Friday night and found a note saying she was going to be spending the night with her girlfriend. I was bummed, wanting to take her out to dinner, but decided to go alone. At the local café I met an old friend who told me about a party that was going on. Against my better judgment, I went, only to see my wife wrapped around her ex boyfriend who had moved back recently. I watched long enough to see they were sharing deep kissed and staring into each others eyes as if they were deeply in love. I guess they were.

I didn't know what to do and about the time I figured I'd pull her off his lap, he stood and she yelped and laughed, when he took her by the hand and led her upstairs. Now, I'd been in that house and knew there were 3 bedrooms and one bathroom up there. They sure as hell weren't going to the bathroom together. As I turned to leave I saw a couple friends who had watched it all and their eyes were sad when they met mine.

About the time my wife would have been getting home, I was on my way back to my old hometown about 200 miles away, with everything that was mine. I left my wife with everything that was hers and ours, I took only that which was mine. My phone started buzzing but as soon as I saw it was Jolee, I ignored it. My parents got the readers digest condensed version and I got my old childhood room back.

I had Jolee served at work, where she was a waitress. It seems she had tried to find me, talking to almost everyone we knew but didn't know anything about where I was. She had called my folks house but they ignored it when they saw who it was. I didn't see Jolee again until we had to appear at court. She looked awful, like she had lost more weight than she should have. Her lawyer stopped her when she came toward me and we went through the whole thing, would counceling work yada yada. I don't the judge my wife cheated on me and I didn't want her back, her new/old boyfriend could have her. That pissed the judge off but she granted our divorce. I noticed, Jolee didn't interject when I accused her of cheating.

I left without having to talk to her and heard through the grapevine she moved in with Tom, her ex. A few months after we were divorced, they married with her about 8 months pregnant. It was funny, her having sex with someone else was painful, but when I heard they made a baby together, I'll admit it, I cried like a baby. From everything I heard, they were happy together, although Tom still stepped out on her from time to time. Vindictively, I hoped him cheating on her hurt.

The reason I wrote this saga was because she also fought ovarian cancer. I didn't hear about it until hear the end, when I received a phone call. It was Tom and I almost hung up. Jolee wanted to see me and the only way I went was because she was very close to her end.

I could hardly recognize her, no hair, saggy skin and just a bag of bones, but when she opened her mouth, I heard that beautiful voice. We talked, she apologized and was curious if the reason I never remarried was because of her. When I nodded, she cried even more. Jolee said she was young, not taking life seriously enough and didn't realized what she did until they were finished. We had a good talk and when I left, she had no problem with me not going to her funeral. We said our goodbyes then and that was it.

I hope it was a long, lingering death!

He never should have taken her back,it sickened me the way they tried to shift the blame onto him. All the times he tried to re-start their relationship and she shut him out in favor of Marie, actually getting mad at HIM when he got upset at all the time she was spending with Marie.

And anyone who believes that that ONE night was the one and only time she cheated on ALL those nights out with Marie should be VERY careful with investment opportunities!

For two people who are SO anxious to keep them together, how could his son and Jill let her stay with them for an entire week without letting him know where she is?

And as others have said, was she still in touch with Marie? Because a non-negotiable condition for reconciliation should have been shutting her out of their lives! For that matter all their family and friends should have cut her out, too!