by HANDYMANATHOME
...but I hope you don't mind me saying that you could use an editor. I offer my services.
You REALLY need an editor. This had possibilities that you failed to meet. 1 star.
Great story when are publishing a follow up about the your return to see Vince and his mate and will they take a look June along as well.?
Why are all Brit men beta cucks? Seriously, is there something in the water?