All Comments on 'Naiya's Fresh Start'

Beautiful story of love and so so sensual. Thanks.

This was incredibly realistic, & I appreciate the time you took in getting it right. The dialogue is spot-on, and the sex is believable: playful, hot, affectionate, sensual. Nice, nice job!

I love this series & I hope you write more of it soon.

As with the rest of this series of stories: what a great read. I noticed that you did your own editing. May I give you a bit of advice about editing your writing. Firstly it is very difficult to edit your own writing, but one way around this problem is to read the story with pencil in hand out loud. I assure you, you will find the mistakes quite easily. But look your writing is great, breezy and very sexy. Please give us more.

I have been writing for many years but am only just starting to experiment with erotica.