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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fantastic.

What an amazingly well crafted and totally mind blowing story.

It made me feel as if I were actually there.

We all owe a great debt of gratitude to those who never returned, they gave us what we have today because of their sacrifice.

teedeedubteedeedubalmost 5 years ago
Outstanding

In every respect. Thanks for sharing.

Crusader235Crusader235almost 5 years ago
Debt

We are still in Debt to the greatest generation. Thank you for writing such a detailed account of one of the hero's. I actually had to look up the 80th Fighter Squadron back then, What a bunch of hero's those guys were. Absolutely loved this story, and added it to my Favs. Thank you for it. Semper Fidelis!

ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 5 years ago
That was amazing

Thank you so much for that wonderful story. It was engrossing from start to finish. I look forward to your next story.

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