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All Comments on 'Nan and Ron Pt. 01'

by cathoberscaravan

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thedayafterthedayafterabout 4 years ago

What can I say. Good start and promising story. Looking forward to reading more of the twins journey of sibling love.

SxypkSxypkabout 4 years ago
Intriguing

I want more! Interesting and sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I love it. So many places it can go. Please write more

LaphroaigLaphroaigabout 4 years ago
Got my attention

Thanks for this opener. I enjoyed it. It needs to followed with some longer chapters, please.

Looking forward to more.

Stu

Jala_WestJala_Westabout 4 years ago

Crud. Last comment was not intended to be posted as a single word entry. I swear I was trying to get something more substantive while switching to anon-mode instead of account mode.

I'm certainly going to be keeping an eye out for future entries. There is real potential here, both with their time in Alaska, and the earlier time in Illinois. Even the sentence "They used to like us." is evocative of both what was before, and what has changed.

TawtawTawtawover 2 years ago

What happened next?

unclemerv77unclemerv77over 1 year ago

I enjoyed the story but, when do we get the rest of it?

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