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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
that was hot and believable

great!

I liked how you spun the tale to be more realistic, with a narrative that dripped with arousal and anticipation.

The teacher-student play was erotic, but not too long, so it didn't detract from the overall story at all.

The only part that could use some revision was the "getting out of the car, to inside of the house" part. That wasn't clearly articulated.

Otherwise, great writing!

CuriousAusGalCuriousAusGalalmost 13 years ago

You had me at Terry Pratchett. Actually, you had me before that, but that just clinched the deal.

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Umm, I guess that this update is the same as the last, and the one before that and the one before that and now the one before that!; I'm afraid it's taken far too long to get around to writing another story, having started it earlier this year. Alas, I have a number of pastime...