All Comments on 'Natalie's Piss Punishment'

For anyone interested the character of Natalie was based on and inspired by Aussie actress and singer Natalie Imbruglia. I would have loved to have treated her like the Natalie in the story! Sexy, innocent, just perfect for defiling and degrading!

What an amazing story, again the idea of being in that situation turned me on so much.

Super hot, please keep writing them :) xx

Sick shit!

A lot different than anything else.

OTT Disgusting, totally twisted and sick.

The characters were terrible, most were cruel so it was too unbelievable. I got bored after a bit and came to the end to let you know nice try but do better next time

Starts off by describing her wearing red panties and then a few paragraphs later she's taking off black ones. Stupid.

Would like to reenact via sext. I’m female, add me on Snapchat roxypaul22

No one would go through that no matter what