All Comments on 'Naughty Nikka'

nice way to use your daughter

The story was pretty good, but the mechanics made it hard to read. Some of the problems I recall are the use of amble where the author meant ample; many others. It astounds me that authors don't spend more time proofing their works.

Your stories are wonderful. Very descriptive and realistic. They are very hot and a turn on. Please write more

Very hot. More, please.

I loved the story. Your detail was perfect. I got hard and stayed hard. Thank you for the pleasure. PLease write more.

My 13 Y/O daughter loves to take my hard cock in her tight asshole! I fuck her and fuck her then pull out so I can cum in her mouth! Then I french kiss her to taste my cum!

The story is very good but it is let down by some appalling spelling and choice of words. Before submitting the story you should go over it carefully checking for errors. We all make these typographical errors but it is easy to rectify them. Otherwise a well told and well planned story.

The story is very good but it is let down by some appalling spelling and choice of words. Before submitting the story you should go over it carefully checking for errors. We all make these typographical errors but it is easy to rectify them. Otherwise a well told and well planned story.

Very descriptive, love the truthful emotional tension between lusting fathers and lusty daughter.

Love to read the sequel with Gloria

that was so fucking hot!!

Wow...I love the way you set the scene.....I can almost see the image....love it

The spelling, misuse of words and punctuation errors were so bad in the first two paragraphs alone I had to stop reading. You really need an editor. Usually I don't comment, but your writing style seemed to have something going for it even in the little I read. The grammar nazi in me could not allow me to continue for the distraction the errors presented. Good luck in the future.

This is one of my favorite stories here. I'm not a grammar nazi, but the mechanics should be better. Setting, situation, the fantasy......it's all good. If you could proof read a little better and take time to fine tune the basics, then no doubt this would be one of the hottest stories here. I

Really hits that fetish spot !

Get a proof reader, and learn to spell.

Impossible to read with all the poor grammar and spelling mistakes

La amo la cuenta. Los criticas de los pinches cabrones son hijos de la gran puta. Solo una mujer podia escribir este punta de vista. Me encanto'. Me gusta la sorpresa.

Naughty little story. Merits!

Wow,,,,,,,,awesome