All Comments on 'Naughty Pleasure Market Ch. 02'

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Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 5 years ago
Getting in deeper

I can't seem to stop reading this story. You just give me enough to make me want to know what is going to happen next.

LASFSEALASFSEAabout 3 years ago
Didn't see that coming

Well, I am now becoming more interested in this story. Not sure why Ethan reacted the way he did and how Matthew will resolve the interaction. A few spelling issues and grammar/ sentence structure but a good read. I am actually looking forward to Ch. 03. I think I am becoming attracted to "Matty"

JaslincJaslincover 2 years ago

Very glad to discover a treasure trove of your writing after being captivated by Erosion 3!

It disturbed at first and yet over the next days it returned to mind more pressing each round.

The writing is just fine btw, the stories are well done and paced. And wonderfully portentous and promising. More!! Now I want to snuggle with Your hot balls!

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