All Comments on 'Necromancer Chronicles Pt. 06'

That was possibly the worst description of a battle I have ever read. After all that build up, it was extremely anticlimactic.

When writing, you should show and not tell. You told me what was happening but there was very little imagery or actual description. Disappointing and unsatisfying. My advice would be to read a book with vivid battle imagery and see how it's done. I hope you don't take thus personally. Your story is a good idea and your grammar is much better than most stories on Literotica.

All the best.

Besnik

Gave you a 5

The only thing what I don't like is this chapter was the final of this book .I hope book 3 is coming soon.

Thanks for this great series. Regale us with more please!

All in all it was a good premise for a story, the only thing I'd say is work on your pacing, you go from 0-100 real fast and some of the smaller details that hook people get lost. But other than that it was good