All Comments on 'Need'

by NRMathis

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Beautiful story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Accepted

Some times we all need to be accepted. Your story need shows the underlying difficulty we all face transitioning from childhood to adult and the problems we bury deep in our psyche that control our relationships. I thoroughly enjoyed the flow of the narrative and this story should continue and develop. It is part of all our lives to face an uncertainty whether gay straight or BI. It is how we grow from that uncertain path that makes us who we are. This is a well crafted short story and better than most I have read here. I understand Coltons pain and his striving for a better future but not one he completely understands. Best wishes WEZ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
didn't like it

Way too much mind shit and not enough cock in the boi slut.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

honestly really good

Tink22004Tink22004over 3 years ago

Beautiful story, I was so glad to come on and see new stories from you! I enjoy your writing so much. I enjoy that even though the stories have amazing sex scenes there’s also something more. Please keep writing and sharing with us!

dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

I absolutely did not expect this to be a story about mental well-being. It’s raw, it’s real, it’s beautiful.

visioneervisioneerover 1 year ago

Excellent storytelling.

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