All Comments on 'Nepotism Ch. 03'

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c4vetteman94c4vetteman94about 6 years ago
No

Not the end. More please.

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 6 years ago
Can this get any better

What a hot sexy story. Love it to bits and really hope you keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Not the end.

No, don't end it yet. Keep going, maybe she gets pregnant? That would be great.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 6 years ago
Another vote for not ending

Please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
No..don't end this...

Walter has to send them on business trips .. her husband either has to catch them fucking, or suddenly die after catching them.. I'm the guy who wanted more nylons and lingerie.. Thank you.. please keep this going.. make it where Devin gets fired, mom gets pregnant, and they use that Bridal file shop to get Mom bridal wear. Only thing missing was the imagining of bed springs creaking and mom STILL wearing her pantyhose as Cain was fucking her.. please..please.. keep this going..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Walter?

You need to shed light on his past. No boss is just ok with what he has just learned unless he has his own personal story....Also, it would be a shame if Cain didn't kick Devon's ass, and Devon getting fired for sexual harassment. Plenty of avenues to take.

GizmorGizmorabout 6 years ago
Nepotism

This is just starting to get interesting. I hope to see what Walter is doing with his granddaughter. Thanks.

sunburycdsunburycdabout 6 years agoAuthor
Feedback

All great ideas. For those interested, Walters back story can be found in Grand Plans.

Thank you for reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wonderful

I have loved all 3 chapters I hope you continue this story.

jwittjrjwittjrabout 6 years ago
Great Story

Awesome three chapters I look forward to seeing it continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More more more

Please do not let this be the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Please more..

Awesome story .. please more !!

sniffpantiessniffpantiesabout 6 years ago
Good!!

Awesome and realistic incest story.....mmmmm

Your email is down?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Waiting for next chapter eagerly

Hi....i am still waiting for the next chapter.

A new life of both.

A new family of both.

Please continue it brother.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More

Would love to find out Madeline Green is Walter's daughter and is in a sexual relationship with her father Walter Fisk. It would address some of the hanging threads left in both chapters 1 and 3 by Madeline Green and Walter Fisk. Maybe calling up both Evelyn and Cain to Walter's sound proof office with two incestuous couples fucking in front of each other, seeing each other naked and committing incest also.

Anyway this story needs to end with Evelyn and Cain finishing the data entry job.

sunburycdsunburycdabout 6 years agoAuthor
Characters backgrounds

Walter's story is told in Grand Plans and Madeline Green can be found in Changing Rooms. All of my stories have links to others.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Pissing while fucking

Another gr8 story & what a turn on to be pissed on while fucking ur mom. Keep it up cain & write a few more chapters. Can't wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Chapter 4

Its a great writing and great story. Please continue next episode.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago

Three great chapters. That was some very hot and arousing storytelling.

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 5 years ago
sweet!!

ready for chapter 4

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More, please!

Would love to read more of this series!

5*

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
Looking good from my point of view.

Devon needs more punishment. Not physical but embarrassment in the office. More peeing needs to happen. They both get turned on by it. Thanks again for your efforts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Need more.

Nice story.. you know all the things that other authors don't know, like the sweaty armpits and women sents and all other erotic things like pissing. Want more of the story. Let them have many nights togather at Cian's home or at his mother's home while his father is sleeping in another room. That'll more horny..

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984about 4 years ago

Good read, but needs more.

Mojo648Mojo648almost 4 years ago
Review

Them two need a holiday (family holiday for a week but a last minute business trip for the husband to Europe, so they went on there own),they had fun, love deepened when they got home, big argument between hubby and wife, she left him, stayed with son who is now debt free and able to rent a 2 bedroomed home for them both.

You can make up what happened after that.

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81almost 4 years ago

sad to see it finished was a great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story 5 stars. Lucky Walter was into incest as well

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please write more chapters and also about walters own incest

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

Well done again, the series started out a little bit off, but somehow you were able to turn it around and hit it out of the park, well done.........():\

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it 5 stars but form instead of from again

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