All Comments on 'Never Comes the Day'

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Anonymousover 10 years ago

I got about halfway down page one, but my god, what an appallingly boring story!

(Edit the bit where you have carpet around the toilet - no one in their right mind has carpet around a toilet.)

daireto over 10 years ago

I was not sure

But in the end really enjoyed it

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Loved it

and you do not have to change the part about the carpet... a lot of people still have it in their bathrooms!

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