All Comments on 'Never Have I Ever Ch. 02'

I was eagerly waiting for this chapter and I was not disappointed. Great work and I can't wait for a third chapter.

loved your story both of them please continue

This story was awesome and my favorite please make a chapter 3 !!!

Nice work, but as the topic said, you MUST look for some help with spelling.

If you feel it's too big a project for you, please send me a mail here or a message on the forum. I will happily help you with it.

Best regards

Eos

wow, the one thing i hate about my family is that my mother is fat. I wish i could have a mom and sister like this, the story actually made me so jealous, so well written and captivating...to hell with spell check you got your point across,

I loved this story. Please continue with additional chapters. I don't want to make any suggestions where it should go because I want to wait to see where your fertile mind takes it. Thanks

I did need a little more editing than it got, minor mistakes, but even those didn't detract from the wonderful story. I hope you continue this series, possibly some more shenanigans during the spring months. (I'd like to see something develop between sister and her girlfriend...) At the end of the school year, maybe she returns home to find her brother much more confident, not quite such a reclusive nerd. Mom is more relaxed now that she's getting laid by her son, taking the edge off her own anxieties. Dad might bow out of the marriage completely, leaving more opportunities for mom and son's activities. Sister could return home to find a VERY sexual atmosphere in the old homestead.

Wherever you take this series, I look forward to reading about it.

END OF PT.2 O!BOY, WHAT ABOUT MOM AND SAMMY. AND DON'T FORGET ADRIENNE'S STORY. BOY DID YOU OPEN A BOX OF WORMS. KEEP GOING HONEY. A FAN FOREVER. MORE MORE MORE

ASAP

That was awesome, please write about this some more. Continue in Adrienne perspective, and wow you have a great series.

that was a very lovin & hott storie i just love it wish ther was more keep up the good work i will be looking for more form you thanks

Lynn your story telling is absolutely FANTASTIC! I was so drawn in. I love my family but so wish I was a part of yours. You all sound so incredibly sexy and beautiful. If this was a movie I would play it over...and over...and over...and over. Loved It!

Very nice. A family plays toghter stays toghter. More PLEASE!

Very good story please continue.

Lynn, this is a great story line and you should continue your creative endeavors, but please get a proof reader. All of the missing words and inaccurate tense forces the reader to keep back-tracking – spoiling an otherwise wonderful reading experience.

Wanted to say I really love the brother/sister aspect of your story but I'm not convinced that the mother part works. Would love the story to continue but without the mother involved. Part 1 of your story worked much better in my opinion. I'm pretty sure I would stop reading the story if it moved more towards the mother and son together. Really good story nonetheless.

Great story. The way you added the mom was hot.

But I don't care for the roommate story. You should make a spin-off if you want to tell it.

I agree, the brother-sister story was incredibly hot. This works, but was just a little weird.

Great story. Never have I ever been drawn into a story so quickly and completely. Nice work.

What a great story.... You HAVE to keep it going... This story IS ME!!!!! When i was younger.... you ARE a GREAT WRITTER,..... please continue this story

I'm not complaining or criticizing you; I'm just giving you my honest feedback, for whatever it's worth. Some great material here: the nerdy bro, Lynn's efforts to help and protect him, the game in the dorm room, the brother/sister sex, even Sammy's guilt. All believable, and a good read. I feel it fell apart after that (part-way into Chapter 2), b/c of involving the mother. Mother/child sex is something I can't identify with AT ALL and find it off-putting in both its "straight" and lezzie forms. If you keep writing this story, I hope you'll tell us about Adrienne's experiences with her brothers, and maybe Sammy and Adrienne can get together (AWA Sammy & Lynn, of course). Who knows? Sammy may be quite a stud by his first year of college.

pleeeeeeease continue this great threesome!

Damn! I would really like to hear Adriennes Story. Also i would love to read about the day when Sammy and his Mother visiting Lynn to spoil her. Another thing i would like to know is how Lynn and her friends do after this amazing game in the first part of the story.

Well thought out and written down, the characters were believable and had the personal touch that makes the reader attach themselves. I also enjoyed the build up and the teasing titillation of the characters, that eventually lead to their sexual bonds of experience. Hope to read more:)

At the very least it would be interesting to hear Adrienne's story. More mom and Sammy, too. And, is dear old dad "dead", or just in need of revival by Lynn, or maybe visiting roommates, or discovering Sammy and mom? Whatever you decide, I hope it happens sometime, the sooner the better.

Since this is all fantisy, we can have the rules anything we want them to be. I am a great fan of incest pregnancy fantasies and have a rule never yo rate anything over 3 without one. I broke my rule here and gave this a 4. Keep on.

Very well done yet not over done! It might be nice to hear about Adrienne's Xmas break getting double teamed.

Not usually into incestuous threesomes but I couldn't stop reading, looking forward to the next part? Please :)

Thank you for this wonderful story. I'd really like to hear what Adrienne told you.. You have made me want to tell about my fantasy that came true..

Please do Adrienne's story of her with her brothers. also nice work on this one. very hot.

About the mother and son relationship...It will NOT happen as the "mother" is in actuality Sammy's and his sister's STEP-MOTHER!!! But with me it's Okay for Sammy to fuck any mother he chooses, including his own Step-Mother.

Sammy definitely has some socially challenging issues; maybe many good rounds in his step-mother's arms, bed and pussy will give him enough 'nads to bring him out of his shell. Although his sister's heart seems to be in the right place, and I do like for her caring and wanting to help her brother, she needs to make up her mind--is she in the game or is she not, she's on again with Sammy and as soon as he' out of sight she's has remorse and guilt for his actions and her ALLOWING him to fuck her. Further, every action, EVERY ACTION Sammy has made concerning sex, both during Chapter 01 and Chapter 02, Every Action, has been totally controlled by his sister. She's really got him so dependent with her controlling attitude he doesn't know (as we used to say in the USNavy) "whether to shit or draw small stores" (stores as in goods, supplies, etc.)!!!

What about Sammy's next year in college? Is he to be staying with his sister at the college she is now attending? Also, she was the least bit bothered that Sammy went hunting with his dad, never said good-bye to him, she spent more than a week still home with her step-mother and went back to school after New Year's--all without any feelings whatsoever about not seeing her brother again for months!!!

Love the story best story i have read in awhile and to the person saying it was their step mother it clearly states that it was their actua mother because it was mentioned the douggter and the mom looks a like and it never said anything about being a step mother just that she was their dads seconed wife.

and clearly you have set it up for at least 2 more chapters. Go for it, we await your 'conclusions'.

I think you should continue from where you left off and then have the brother come to the college and have him have sex with the roommates and then sister gets dragged into it to make a 4 some.

I hope you will keep up the good story telling. A mind like yours is a terrible thing to waste, and stories like this keep our brains hopping, amongst other body parts.

This story has so many twists!! Getting Mom involved saved her mind and a great time is had by all. Back to school and Adrienne fucks both her brothers!! This story or series of stories better not be over!! Carrie, the other roommate, must have an incest story to relate at some point!! This writer knows how to put fun and sex and solving any emotional baggage with the right turn of phrase. I won't tell you how many times I physically enjoyed it!! I hope this isn't the end! Your imagination is awesome!!

Stretches credibility a little, but uses emotional context well to show how it's possible the situation could happen. Very erotic and fun. 5 from me.

This pair of stores do stretch the bounds of credibility just a tad.

You somehow manage to get inside your young lady's mind and come up with, I'll say it again, a devious turn of mind.

Good job.

Though it seemed a little stretched, it was good. Both stories were very good.

Please make a part 3

Please make a part 3, maybe some more things between lynn and adrienne, or a 4some with carrie and sammy.

I dont know it was a good read however i stopped reading when the mom got involved, it just felt like something that was special between two people was turned into something .....trashy (dont know if that makes sense). I just liked it better when it was a deeper love explored by lynn and sammy.

Seriously, this was one of the best stories I've ever read. Please please pleaseee write part 3!

Where is the next chapter?

I liked the story, but not really into the mom stuff, so chapter 2 was a bit of a miss for me. I like the idea of Sammy going to the same school as Lynn and maybe hooking up with her roommates during some wild games or something as they help peel the shell off of him.

I personally think brother and sister should just stay together, truly a remarkable storing, very involved, so?, where is 3rd chapter?

One of the best stories and looking forward to read chapter 3.....

Female POV wins every time.

Lynn rocks!

Sammy is more like the little engine that could.

They make a great team.

Sammy and Lynn fuck everybody.

OMG!!! That was INCREDIBLE!!! Where the hell is the third chapter? :O ;)

Seriously though, where is it. PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!

I really liked chapter 1, and chapter 2 did not disappoint.

Thank you for the awesome story!

Please keep on writing the third part.

Personally, I'd like Adrienne to have some share of Sammy and Lynn too, and maybe after that there'll be swapping or big group fun.

Yes, I think you should write some more its really good, Thanks

That was very very dirty. If you write more of their story I will read. Is Adrianne going to be included in the next one? Is she getting her own story?

Superb story and oh so hot!! Please continue it!!

Love the first two, now have to see where this goes. Please continue the series. To many tines have I seen story series left incomplete.

I thoroughly enjoyed these stories. The game was a great start, and I was disappointed when it ended. Then you stepped up the passion with the continued interactions of the characters. Bravo!

Please continue.

I enjoyed how the second chapter was a separate and different story, instead of being more of the same. I would like the third chapter to be something else also; perhaps Adrienne's story intermingled with Lynn's. But whatever you do, congrats!

This is the first time I've ever written a comment, and have to say this story is very well written.

It's been a long time since I've read one this good.

I suppose the likely next chapter would be Adrenne's tale, working into the girls getting together. Then perhaps being caught by, or seducing, the other roommate, Perhaps a group vacation, camping trip, etc. Love outdoor sex!

I thought you were gonna finish it with that. But with that cliffhanger, we'll see how naughty adrienne got haha

Hot stuff

Great job, so naughty. Really appreciate your efforts.

I would LOVE to see the next chapter, possibly about how you left us hanging at the end of THIS one.

Please add to this story it seems like it go on for another couple of chapters. Like what happen when Sammy got to college with Lynn or what happen between Sammy and Mom please try to add more

I loved each and every word. Please continue. I've only read a couple of your stories, but loved them and plan on reading all of your work. Thanks so much for sharing your marvelously dirty thoughts.

was loving it until i got to the bit with the mother, terrible character and i was hoping that the parents would be out of the picture soon, then that happens. the twist at the end has some potential but still annoyed about the mom

Thoroughly enjoyed both chapters of this, looking forward to more!

I loved this story but felt like you left me hanging for the thrid chapter.

Please write another chapter to this story.As incredible as the situations seem I couldn't stop jerking.I can relate to Sammy and his shyness but still having an incredible sex drive.

Good thing, Too.

Very imaginative. You always seem to fascinate me and never fail to come up with another delight.

All kinds of possibilities for a 3rd chapter.

Thank you for a very entertaining time.

Kept me from weeding the garlic patch, wink wink Gotta get out and shake a leg (probably the middle one too),

SliperyRox

I read two part of theses series so far and I am absolutely amazed. So exciting detail and thrilling plot. Please continue writing.

If you'd like you can add in some lactation to it. That they got their mother to lactate and both the kids enjoyed it very much as much as the readers if not more! Would love to see that.

Thank you very much for your great stories, love it :)

the most interesting sexy hot stories i have ever read would enjoy a pic of you to see what sammy had fun with

"My mother didn't appear to know what she was doing between my legs, but it didn't matter."

One of the best of the best!

Thank You!!!

I jst love da story and da way it is written, I think I'm in love with di author. Yu r definately my all time favorite author. I'd love to read of Adrenne and her bros.

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Pure awesomeness. Great story, great style. When is part 3 coming out? :D

yes another chapter this is good 5 stars

I actually half expected Sammy and Chissy to end up together since both were shy

Once again you have created a wonderful story that is so hot without getting carried away with unneeded sex scenes. I loved this whole story line.

I dident really like this one

Story deserves another chapter or two.Keep up the good work.

loved it as much as the first chapter!

Would love to see the third part. Maybe add kink, bondage play or something else?

Should have got 4.5*, but horrible grammar, spelling, sentence structure, fragmented ideas and logic made the errors EXPLOSIVE and halted reading too often. Revise it with a grammar checker and your score will rise.

The mother came in to picture and it spoiled all. Any ways it was a good story till mother got involved. You could have brought in a friend or someone else. I have seen a lot of writer make a mistake for wanting the story to be longer.

I cant say its as good as the first one but its still pretty good. Id like to see more of this story, maybe with thm both going to the same collage and maybe some dom/sub play.

when will the 3rd part be written

Awsome storie dont listen to the others it is not farfetch or ruend because of the mom maybe the third part could be about him going to his sisis collage and he hooks up with her and adreanna where he gets to become his sisis boy freand around campus

Pls make a movie of 1 and 2

Don't listen to people about the mom being a mistake. It was a good story and one I enjoyed reading. Looking forward to part 3 and hoping there's more to come after that.

Loved the story

transferring bacteria and fecal matter is risky, unhealthy, and a turn off.

I saw you planned on writing another chapter, but it's been quite a while. Lots of directions it could go, more mom and Sammy, maybe the story of Adrienne and her brothers, maybe bring daddy back into the family or even something involving Carrie, the shy one.

I just hope you write more, you are very good and screw the haters and know-it-alls. They love to tear others down, but never contribute anything.

I need to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing with us!

The sign of a good writer is characters so engaging that the reader hates the story to end. You're there.

So glad there is a part 2. We'll written, great characters. Would love to see another but in the mean time, will absorb some of your other stories. Thank You

This is an amazing series. Congratulations and please continue.

Never Have I Ever, chapter 2 is even better that chapter 1. Very, very good read.

I think u should know that I hate you for not writing more of these amazing stories. There are only a couple of authors I hate and you take the cake. Your stories are so good I was up 3:52 am finishing it when I have to be up a 9:00 am. Plz keep writing so I can find more reasons to hate you.😤😤😤🙅🙅😾😾

I have read a lot of stories but this one rates the best yet!! I hope you don't take long for chapter 3. You really have a way to keep a person interested and a way to actually see the characters like in a movie. Keep up the great work!!

Great story. It's 6:30 in the morning and I just got done reading the 2nd story. I hope your going to write a 3rd. But for now I'm going to take a shower cuz it's time for yahoo wacka doo.

Do a brother swap between the roommates or something but please make a third one

I also wish an episode with father and daughter.