by geronimo_appleby
is what you do so well...
Not my thing but dirty, seedy and horny is in every word. You are a fantastic writer and I never just blow smoke up someones arse...evocative in the extreme
I think the 1st comment was right on point, excellent story all around. I also don't go for each & every depravity you described, but thought you very much captured the mood w/ the excellent descriptive language used. Finally, the last several paragraphs brought together the still-hanging parts of the plot well. I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future- nicely done!
Your words capture each scenario in such vivid clarity and make the reader feel they are in it, such a gift, thumbs up GA :)
This story is perfect for when one wants slime and degradation. It just is so dramatic and intense in its perversity that the filth enhances the overall experience. I enjoyed this definitely, but I felt naughty and ashamed about it. Thats the whole idea isn't it? Well done.