All Comments on 'Never Talk To Strangers'

by geronimo_appleby

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janeyljaneylalmost 13 years ago
dark...

is what you do so well...

Not my thing but dirty, seedy and horny is in every word. You are a fantastic writer and I never just blow smoke up someones arse...evocative in the extreme

BayneBaynealmost 13 years ago
Agreed....

I think the 1st comment was right on point, excellent story all around. I also don't go for each & every depravity you described, but thought you very much captured the mood w/ the excellent descriptive language used. Finally, the last several paragraphs brought together the still-hanging parts of the plot well. I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future- nicely done!

BabyBlue2005BabyBlue2005almost 13 years ago
Classic dark and dirty

Mr Appleby, you are always a damn good read xx

goodgurlgetsbadgoodgurlgetsbadover 12 years ago
nasty dirty awesome

Your words capture each scenario in such vivid clarity and make the reader feel they are in it, such a gift, thumbs up GA :)

joodlejoodleover 11 years ago
Dirty and sick

This story is perfect for when one wants slime and degradation. It just is so dramatic and intense in its perversity that the filth enhances the overall experience. I enjoyed this definitely, but I felt naughty and ashamed about it. Thats the whole idea isn't it? Well done.

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