New Girl in Town Pt. 01

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"Yes, our Ms. Golden came to play today and you were just laying there ignoring her."

I turn to Jessica. "My apologies for missing your rapier wit Jessica, it won't happen again."

"See that it doesn't Jake," Jessica states as she takes her seat. "I like an appreciative audience."

Despite my mood I laugh. "Do I clap or throw roses?"

"Lilies," She states.

"Lilies," I ask.

"I like lilies over roses so if you plan on throwing flowers at me, that's rude by the way, it should be lilies."

"Got it," I answer. "I should not throw lilies at you."

"Hand them," She tells me. "It's the polite way."

"Yes ma'am, I'm making a mental note now."

"Don't take too long, class is starting." She jokes as the bell rings.

Ms. Simpson stands up and begins to speak, "Now class..."

"One second Ms. Simpson, I'm making a mental note." I tell her garnering several giggles from around the room.

"We don't all class for you to finish Mr. Gibson." She retorts getting more laughs.

"I've almost got it. Lilies, not for throwing. Thank you for the extra time."

"I'm sure he's got it Ms. Simpson. The little mouse in his head is back on the wheel thing." Jessica jumps in.

"His name is Mortimer." I tell her.

"As entertaining as this show is, may I get back to reading list for the year?" Ms. Simpson asks us.

"Mortimer says go ahead," I state getting a laugh from her.

"You'd better feed him lots of cheese Mr. Gibson because he's going to need the energy."

"So do you want to talk about it?" Jessica asks as she walks beside me heading towards our next classes.

"About what books I'm going to choose off the reading list?" I deflect.

"I heard something about tires," She continues volleying my deflection right back in me face.

"Wow, you slapped that right back into my face real quick," I jokingly tell her.

"Years of practice," She states then noting the confused look on my face. "I play volleyball. Spiking things back is sort of my thing."

"Volleyball huh," I ask.

"Yeah, I know volleyball is pretty lame compared to football and all that but I enjoy it." She says.

"Who says volleyball is lame? It's pretty exciting and way faster paced than football is."

"Watch a lot of volleyball do you? It's not all beach volleyball with us in skimpy bikini's ya know?" She teases.

"If you tell me that the tight shorts are a myth too, I think I might cry." I tease back.

"Oh those, those are real." She says cocking her hip towards me so my eyes are drawn to her shapely rear.

"I... uh... see... uh..." I stammer.

She pushes me towards my classroom door as she heads into Trigonometry and I swear she puts an extra swish in her hips as she enters the room. "Work on that stammer Mr. Gibson." She teases before disappearing into the room. I nearly walk into the door of my class causing the teacher Mrs. Warren to ask if everything's all right.

"Things are spectacular Mrs. Warren, absolutely spectacular."

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

This is about my 5th time back to this story, and I love each word every time even though I know what happens. One of the things I love about it is that it’s an actual story, like belongs on a shelf story, and because it does get erotic, though I love the lack of it because it makes this more realistic, it could be right there next to fifty shades or something. I’ve posted my comment for this time around, back to my reading!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I can get over the grammar, but the dialogue portions are starting to get annoying. Not every reply requires an identification of who was speaking. You don't need to use "stated", "answered", "said", "exclaimed", etc. Everytime someone says something.

Also, kids that are smart do not take Trig or Geometry as seniors. They take AP Calculus or regular Calculus at the very least. And AP Physics. Or perhaps an AP class of a specialized biology like Anatomy. Biology is an 8th grade class for smart kids. Geometry is at best a 9th grade class and Trig is a 10th grade class at the latest for smart kids.

Also, not every scene needs to end with Jake getting made fun. Jessica always being better than Jake is also annoying. Why would she have any interest in someone who is substantially below her in just about ever way? It gets boring when there is no variety.

lastboyleftlastboyleft3 months ago

i would personally like it when i will unload four buckshots in tires of jamie in front of his face while saving rest two for those two. loved the story btw

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOG6 months ago

**THIS**is a story that I foresee as being quite enjoyable as it proceeds.

Jake is a "jock", but a smart one, which is just what pisses Patrick Greene off so much. Plus, Patrick is threatened by Jake...he KNOWS Jake is going to surpass him in their Senior year...OR, Patrick is going to get royally and badly injured in an early game (I REALLY want to use bad language about Patrick...but will restrain myself...🤬)

Jessica is apparently going to be caught up in a MAJOR mess in this school...with her being an athlete herself, hopefully she is able to at least anticipate Patrick's crap; plus, I wanna know two things-

A) What happened the last year with Jennifer and Jake? It really sounds like Patrick and his mob ¿overstepped? the line there...more reason for Jake to resent Patrick and seek "retribution"...

B) What happened at Jessica's last school, that her mother (the doctor) referenced?? Sounds like some more background that hopefully will be clarified!!

Five**5**Stars, so far!!!!!

vanyevanye6 months ago

The writing tense is odd, but the story is compelling

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