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"I'm in no rush, Jess." I assure her. "We'll get there when we get there. If it takes us awhile then it takes us awhile. I'm not going to rush you into anything."
"You're so sweet, Jake." Jessica smiles at me. "But I don't think it's going to take a whole lot of time. I already feel like I've wasted too much of our precious time together on this. I'm not going to allow Sean to ruin another thing in my life."
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Thanks again for reading, commenting and voting. Chapter 10 will hopefully be coming soon and to lay any fears to rest, I have the storyline planned out to New Years, so far. Jake, Jessica and the rest aren't going to disappear for a while.
- COMMENTS
NickCaveover 1 year agoTo expand on HDK's comment regarding this entry:
Ray pulls up to Bobby's house after spotting Jake's Mustang parked in the driveway. Bobby, Marybeth and I all look up as Ray speaks.
Jake's Mustang was not parked in Bobby's driveway. Jake walked to Bobby's house. On Page 1, skip to SUNDAY and you'll see. In fact, Marybeth makes a big deal about "You WALKED here?!" and Jake says how it's only a mile to two.
Here's my take on issues like this...Until I am told otherwise, AuroraIncident is not a professional writer. Unless the number of issues is so overwhelming that I have to repeatedly go back and re-read paragraphs, I am going to grade the story based on whether the plot was interesting or not mainly. So far, I have given each Chapter a 5 Star vote. Now, I do think that you, AuroraIncident, are good enough to need an editor. If someone can't write for shit, an editor isn't going to help them or their story. You can clearly write...you just need to have someone who is good at editing to assist you if you decide to continue writing in the future. I just looked and I see that Chapter 24 was submitted only 2 weeks ago, so you obviously are continuing to write and that just put a BIG smile on my face.
Here is another important thing to consider. Be careful when choosing an editor. I don't have any particular names in mind, but I firmly believe that a lot of "editors" on Literotica are just people who enjoy getting sneak peeks at new stories and enjoy being able to say, "Yeah...I helped XYZ write ABC Part 1 & ABC Part 2. I was the editor. It was my recommendation that Joe's dog runs away. Originally, the dog was going to be stuck by a drunk driver and blah blah blah". The reason I have made this admittedly harsh comment is because I've read stories where there are 2 editors listed and there were spelling errors in the very first sentence of the fuckin' story!!
Writers should finish a draft with errors in it. They're often pushing a stream of consciousness onto a piece of paper, or onto a keyboard these days, and spelling something incorrectly is not nearly as bad as losing your thoughts on what you were going to do in your story next. I highly recommend installing the browser plugin Grammarly. Even for non-writers.
Anyway, I am wasting far too much time talking out of my ass here... I need to get my butt back to reading!
RobjustRobabout 2 years ago5 stars for another great chapter. Wish I could give 6 stars for the Vixen reference, love them.
