All Comments on 'New Kid on the Block'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Welcome back! I’d love another chapter.

MountainMan1336MountainMan1336about 1 year ago

Where is the rest of the story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Huh?

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

Nice 3/4 of a story. No real build up, she goes from dead drunk customer to lover in 0 seconds flat. There wasn't any ending. Is there going to be a concluding chapter? If so, you should have labelled this Chapter 1.

dragonsbaindragonsbainabout 1 year ago

We definitely need more...maybe tie it into 1br some how

fixer43fixer43about 1 year ago

page 3 is missing. Please continue

davp6255davp6255about 1 year ago

hope there's more to this. love it

redbaron172redbaron172about 1 year ago

O.M.G..... Please don't let this be a one and done story!!?? Please, PLEASE continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This sounds like a great story that's going too fast. This should be about chapter ten. Please find a way to keep this going. Let me thank you for the rest of your work too. I enjoy it all.

AmbisinisterAmbisinisterabout 1 year ago

Good beginning. Ending felt flat, though. Hopefully there's more to come?!

gbamin9gbamin9about 1 year ago

Such nice characters you have built! I would love to read more of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Would have been 5 stars if the story hadn't stopped in the middle. As it is, it's Erotic Couplings, not Romance. You've shown in past stories your strength.

BHCoupleBHCoupleabout 1 year ago

I certainly hope you're going to continue this story

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Needs a continuation, really like Rick and feel like you could give us more tales from the bar.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman6 months ago

good but another page to explain her missed appointment, Alex and what happens

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