by Member389
Nice 3/4 of a story. No real build up, she goes from dead drunk customer to lover in 0 seconds flat. There wasn't any ending. Is there going to be a concluding chapter? If so, you should have labelled this Chapter 1.
O.M.G..... Please don't let this be a one and done story!!?? Please, PLEASE continue!!
This sounds like a great story that's going too fast. This should be about chapter ten. Please find a way to keep this going. Let me thank you for the rest of your work too. I enjoy it all.
Good beginning. Ending felt flat, though. Hopefully there's more to come?!
Would have been 5 stars if the story hadn't stopped in the middle. As it is, it's Erotic Couplings, not Romance. You've shown in past stories your strength.
Needs a continuation, really like Rick and feel like you could give us more tales from the bar.
good but another page to explain her missed appointment, Alex and what happens