All Comments on 'New Owner'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
hot

What a great story!!Please don't stop there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
More, more!

Great theme -- would love to see more vignettes set in this same universe!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Amazingly hot story

Such a hot story! Even though I am a straight guy, I got off on the story. Then again, so did I on most other stories of this author. Wasn't a continuation of the Longton series long overdue?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
HOT!

I love stories such as this, where the contrast between the sexes is so stark (naked).

The women are beautifully described, with loving detail to their sophistication and elegant clothing. I also loved how the young girl had so much authority!

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Could have been great

I know this is fiction but a man with an 11” prick is a freak of nature. To make the story worse a petite young women mounts him, in a standing position, and takes him completely such that her entire weight is supported only by his dick? This scenario is so absurd that it takes a lot away from the eroticism of the story. As written, this story belongs in the Syfi & Fantasy category.

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