All Comments on 'New Rules'

I... Having in my eyes the video clip of Dua Lipa and the dancers living in the dorm with her (is that a dorm, in LA?!),

and listening to a cover performed by a really talented Polish bassist (bassists are always the best),

with every sentence of your lyrics I was reminded of both Britney Spears and the webcomic by Dumbing Of Age, set in Indiana.

Excellent premises. Let's hope for a follow-up!

And, not to sound annoying, but since it's all girls running things in charge, with female agency and proud pleasure-seeking, have you thought of participating in the Pink Orchid Contest? It's in February...

Thanks for the comment Norway... I was inspired by that video for sure. I think it was a hotel in the video but it reminded me of a dorm or sorority situation and I ran with it!

A solid five. I don't normally like lesbian stuff that much. With that said, I found this highly erotic. Excellent story, keep up the good work.

Nice story. I was surprised no actual rule was mention, like she had to stay nude, or as the rookie she had to earn her sisterhood by letting any of the girls use her anytime. even without it 5 stars, hope maybe you would consider another chapter.

I really thought I had commented on this before. I’m such a ditz 😬. Cute and sexy and fun. Em

The best ditz :)

fantastic erotic loving and very very sexy