All Comments on 'New Years Eve Gang Bang'

For a first effort, I'd say that was very good! Write more!

What a great start to writing erotica...keep it up..it can only get better. Please post a photo in your profile.

To this lady's charms....there were done no harm(s)....so that when her man is once more in her arms....there will be no alarms....because he knows the score....about his sweetie/slut-whore....LOL....Nexy....continue to be sexy....and please do write...about another night....where you had a lot of sexual delight......3/27

Absolutely wonderful, I adore drinking cunt juice, then fucking realy begins. More and more please and soon

Most mens fantasy... to take part in group sex or watch his wife being gangbanged

and the next best thing is to hear or read about it from her. Keep up the good work.

Good story. You didn't try to go over the top with details or the story in general. Keep writing :)

A very good read, more please, :-))

Nothing could be better than to get the girl wetter with a gang bang! Nice story - hope it is real and you were sore the next day. . . .

brilliant first story. reading this was like watching it all taking place. do hope there more of this kind of horny story to cum,

Just thought I say, I loved your story, an easy hot read, but not over the top. Keep up the good work!

Very good first submission. Keep writing. You might want to try and audio submission in the future. Older women are a real "turn on" especially to younger guys. They love to imagine being used by a cougar. If you still like the gangbang theme you might want to think about being in a college dorm visiting your son or nephew or son of a friend when you find yourself flat on your back as all the guys on the floor line up to unload in you. Good luck.

I would love to help you make this happen this New Years. Love the picture of your cleavage.

This was good!!!

i loved your story.next time take me lol i know your a hot women!

3somes are our fav. Would like to see my wife gang banged in Atlantic City this year