All Comments on 'Night Diving'

happy ending. That was beautiful. You write wonderfully and show a depth of emotions in so few pages that it truly is astounding. Great job, you got a five from me.

but erotic too. I've read many stories about shower sex, pool sex and sex in bath tub, but have never read story about sex at night under tropical waters. I was surprised that I became aroused reading about it from your story. You described it so well I could actually visualize how jinx must have felt. Great story..I've been a fan of your writting since your xena fanfic days.

As with all of your work it is absolutly wonderful! I have yet to find a story of yours that I haven't wanted to read several times. I have to say that what I think sets your stories a step(or three) above almost everyone else on this site is a plot and character development. Please keep up the fabulous work

~Cromm~

This is a wonderful story in which you manage to develop a character that the reader cares about, and you are able to do it in such a short period of time. You have a writing style that both inspires and intimidates, because you make the words come alive on the page so well that it encourages me to try, yet you set the bar so damn high that it's scary. You have an incredible catalog of work judging by what I've read thus far that I am planning on devouring and hopefully learning from. Thank you.

and pacing. This is the first story I have read on this site with a "diving" theme.

Good thing I decided to check and see if there were any new stories in your list, Colly :) This was unusual, well-written (as always) and very very hot! I really liked the hint that Jinx's friend Sally could have been more than a friend, if only Jinx had been able to catch a break (or, at least, I hope that's the hint we were supposed to get) :) Good blend of characterization, background, and a very sensual and satisfying payoff.

Very nice, well constructed diving scenes.

Well, ok, the diver in me was screaming "Get Training... trust-me dives are dangerous". But hot story, very nice.

As always, your story is romantic, sweet and very hot.

An interesting climax in it as well.

Well done.

You keep amazing me, I can practicly feel what the caracters are feeling. waiting forward for your next tale

Oh...wouldn't it be loverly...*kisses* Colly

very well written, loved it.

I would love to engage in some waterplay in the islands. I loved the descriptive scenes of your story. And that sex scene underwater. WOW... Terrific...

as always. (=

I can relate to Jinx, but at 71 I'm not hanging out for a happy ending. The magnitude of the loss of Colleen to this site may never be fully appreciated. Aussie Frank

I liked the way your story got to be a happy ending, without losing believability in what could be called the real world. Give us more Matty and Jinx.

Colleen! You did it again, girl! This story was fantastic. I've always had a thing for Aussies ;) You should continue Jinx and Matty's little fling! It really is spectacular!

A wonderful story of beautiful lesbian love,very very well written by someone who understands the exquisite sweetness of the love of two women for each other.

sweet passionate and lovely <3 love Colly's works.

I love your writing but I think this has to be my favorite.

Nice job.

Cat

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So glad that the jinx was broken for Jinx and that she found that someone special in Matty. Your description of them underwater was fantastic. Is it something you experienced?

..., while I agree wholeheartedly with your comment, I'm sorry to say, from what I've been able to gather from the Literotica Forum, Colleen Thomas passed away on May 26th, 2006. I do not know the particulars.

We all lost one hell of a talented writer that day.

Several of Colleen's stories have made it on my "Instant Favorites List", and that is not something that occurs often.

She could have us fooled? A talented male writer disguised as CT? Hmm never know do we?

You write beautiful stories. Thank you.

I love it! I was hoping it would be more than a one night stand for Jinx and Matty.

A salute to a great writer, wish you were here sharing your talent. But I know you are in a better place now in HEAVEN.(cinder)

Running out of jinx sounds fantastic and for “jinx” it was on time …. The feeling of having goo on your hands that holds the pitch and everything falls apart is not fun and does not bring happiness into your life ….. good luck jinx, may read some more about you soon

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