All Comments on 'Night Noises'

A really fine job of description. Wonderfully written 'blow by blow' account.

Well done.

SJ, you're among the few authors that write in the present tense that I like to read. It's because you make me feel that I'm there in the scene.

The story flows nicely and without difficulty. I would have liked a little more background on the characters especially the protagonist and her unfulfilled fantasies.

All in all, you wrote a very hot stories without needing all the "Ooohhh" and "Ahhhh".

Great job SJ.

OMG, SJ .. this is one of the hottest 3-some stories I have ever read ... WOW WOW ... Your writing style is wonderful, I could easily visualize the HOT scene you described, the sight of Renee's glistening just fucked pussy, the crown of his cock .. wonderful words, sooo erotic !! I want more, more!! B.

SJ, that was amazing. I love this line, "The pull of my skin around him is a painful kind of pleasure." So hot, girl!

My only complaint is that I wish the story was longer (not really a complaint there). :)

Thanks for sharing your writing with us!!

Wicked hot writing. really very, uh, involving.

Your stories are great and this is the best one yet! More for these 3??? I hope so.

Sophia Jane, your talent is really coming into its own! This story is a real improvement even over the things we all liked of yours earlier. Good luck with it!

Your writing style is a pleasure. The special touches that I found so delightful were too numerous to attempt to recall

here. It was a great deal of fun.

While I really hadn't anticipated this with bated breath, I was surprised to discover a couple of times that I had either held my breath or was breathing shallowly. Does that count as breathtaking?

Keep it up--pun intended.

(The code for this is DEA1; considering the rush, I wonder if...)

The canvas of words was a masterpiece!

Thanks for the pictures!

Sexmate

I really enjoyed this, great images, emotion and passion.

Very hot stuff indeed!

Ok... lemme catch my breath... then, can we do that again? Very fun. :)

Thank you for bringing so much pleasure with your magical words. This is a story I'll long remember. Bravo!

You are a very skillful writer. The images work to perfection. I usually don't get an erection just reading stories, but this one really got to me. What a fantasy for all three characters. No wonder thay all are so aroused.

Your best so far. Somehow you manage to translate the lyrical side of your poetry into your prose. Great work!!

The story flowed wonderfully. Well done.

This story is a model for new writers. The ability to put what you feel, see and hear into words is what writing is about. The ability to make me feel, see and hear is " true talent". DS

SJ this is one very hot story, it was a pleasure to read. Hope you do more with these characters.

SJ I am so glad that I read this. You write straight hot sex and I like it. Great Job!

short but sweet. never once felt cheated by length. was pulled into the tryst and was captivated by the excitement. awesome job, babe!

Great story - animalistic, and very naughty, and certainly worth reading (which is generally measure in fluid ounces if you know what I mean).

hot hot hot

great story would love to be in that situation ....had me as hard as a rock ...thanks xxoo