by Hadderity
I really enjoyed your characterization, the fact that i felt for the characters and got extremely invested in their individual stories. But besides that, the theme was great, I enjoyed what you did with the music quotes and your writing is pretty fucking good. These were grounded characters that sounded like they needed each other and the way the sex was written was awesome, plus it showed off who they are as people through sex. This was great. Keep up the work!