All Comments on 'Night of the Tornadoes'

Cute story, great feel of the back woods language.

Of course that was an unbelievable amount of fucking for a little virgins first time.

Still a good fun read.

Overall, I liked your story, but the ending of Tempest getting with her disgusting, good-for-nothing father was very disappointing. Instead, she should have gone with Dave and gotten into a relationship with his son, Jim, and maybe things could have gone from there...