All Comments on 'Nights at the Gas Station Ch. 04'

Good going! Great Going! I love it.

When I finished reading part3, I hoped for a twist... something that would not let the old man have his way. Now this... was unexpected. However how do you get out of a murder?

I gave it a 5 because of the writing, the invetivness and just because I "love" you.

Baby, I love your stories, but this one made me laugh like crazy.

I am imagining Paresh's dialogues in my mind & im going nuts !!!

Imagine this :

"Haraam Zyadi , kutiyaaaaaa, tune meri luli chabaa li, aaaaaaaahhhhhh"

"Nahin paresh bhai aapki jhande meri naaak mein chale gayi thi, I am....I am sorry...I didn't mean to...."

"Chup kar chudel, mai tujhe jaan se maar doonga"

Sorry for lightening the horny mood with this one, but the laughter killed my boner (which was bigger than Troy's)

I think im gonna go and watch Tom & Jerry :)

P.S. UrbanSlut, you know you rule,right?

Hi Guys

The above translation was totally THE BEST ! Haven't laughed that hard in years.

Cheers,

I liked the previous chapters but this one felt more like a waste of time. You had an opportunity to create an interesting chapter but this ended up being more like a bad effort on drama. It kind of ruined the rest of the story too since the old guy was a interesting character but... 1*