All Comments on 'Nights at the Gas Station Ch. 05'

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angel228angel228about 14 years ago
Heads Up!

So you got the other room clean, but what are you gonna do with the fingerprints in this room? :P

Great story! Keep it going!

urbansluturbanslutabout 14 years agoAuthor

Damn, you caught a loophole, angel! :P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
awesome

u r awesome... love the writing... this is erotica... others are just abt banging... sure caused a tingling down south

KritiKritialmost 11 years ago
Awesome Write up

No doubt you are an amazing writer with terrific imagination,i mean the way this story has panned out,could very well be a hollywood movie plot.

But to be frank , a death,in a sex plot was a bit of mood dampner.Its one thing to commit adultery and some thing different to be involved in a federal crime,i mean savitri could go to jail for life.I wouldn't myself imagining to be in such a scenario.Given that your stories inspire me to fancy them on myself.

But no matter how blabber ,you remain my fav erotic writer.

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