All Comments on 'Nikki Ch. 02'

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Friskee_cplFriskee_cplover 16 years ago
More descrptions of the shagging needd

It was quite good but I think you need to add a bit more to the sex scenes. They were a bit short on detail. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Too short....

Very, very brief descriptions of everything....

PEATBOGPEATBOGover 16 years ago
Excellent tale!!!

Yes an excellent tale with just the right degree of sensuality. Took me back to my high school days some 50 plus years ago. While I never had the luck of having a Ms. Norcross to complete my education, I got lucky with some co-eds and a couple of distant cousins, all eager to learn and practice life's necessary skills. I like your style so keep up the good work! Pete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Dreams of lust

Pretty good story, but it needs more detail of the sexcapades. There were 1 or 2 "Hot" teachers when I was in high school, but most were old maids with cobwebs in their cunts.

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